The Benefits of Art, Info. and Website. Options

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Hi fellow cB members !
Would you like to help me to prepare my persuasive essay about the benefits of art?

If so, my teacher assign a persuasive essay research to support my "supporting ideas".

On my future essay, i'm suppose to include ..
I. Thesis Statement
a. supporting ideas ( include three subtopics )
II. Subtopic 1
a. supporting ideas (at least 3)
III. subtopic 2
a. supporting ideas (at least 3)
IV. subtopic 3
a. supporting ideas (at least 3)
V. Conclusion - restate your thesis.

Anyways, the point is .. i need some infomation about the benefits of art that you know about .. and i need a very good website that gives facts about art ... example: how much school have art teacher ?

Mostly every website .. i visit, are terrible.

i'll update more later ! thanks for your time and patient.


EDIT//

Well, i did a brainstorm

express who you are, feeling, emotions, mood
shares ideas and clues
thoughts flow ideas ( express freely )
helps people who are depress

Old and mordern times of art.

gang art express who they are by spraying bottle, cargo writing. it is their views and it seem to be trash to people but its not .. ( not offending )
gang art ---> cargo writing

indian face art express symbol

greek crave sculpture for art, express their belief is religions

egyptian art express thought holographic. has a storys on wall, effort of carving ..


it helps to think better, become creative in physical, performace, and mental activity


helpful links that i find but not enough to support
http://www.goshen.edu/art/ed/help.html
http://www.art4people.org/faq/faq.html#provide

EDIT



PART II
Forget the part above this.


May you correct and help my final outlines better before i print out ? please.


i NEED to include this part.


I. Thesis Statement
a. supporting ideas ( include three subtopics )
II. Subtopic 1
a. supporting ideas (at least 3)
III. subtopic 2
a. supporting ideas (at least 3)
IV. subtopic 3
a. supporting ideas (at least 3)
V. Conclusion - restate your thesis.
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I. Art program are designed to develop a person’s potential in life to be successful and reach their fullest potential.
Less than half of the nations are taught in art
More then half of the nations are not taught in art
Many test scores are not very high in advance level or improving
II. Expression
Art help them express themselves through moods and emotions.
Release pressures
Feel better
Develop better social skills
III. Development and Creation
Art allow for expressions and creativity to develop physical and mental abilities.
Motivation to learn
Academic performances
Better school attendance records
IV. Forces of Art
Art boast test scores and more benefits of educations.
Increase percentage of scores
People with no art skills are not achieving at high level
Lack of performing and quality work of art
V. Test scores can be improved if students study or take art class. The more students participate in art, gain development skills, and improve abilities in right or left brain and increases test scores. So, students can have a better path for the futures.

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For your introductory paragraph, you can state the ideas (duh)

Some ideas that releate to your topic is that it's a great stress reliever. Students can put all their emotions on an easel, paper, whatever. That could make up one paragraph ..or substopic.

Another idea is that it allows people to express their creativity. Some people express it through writing while others can draw/paint, etc. That could be another sub-topic.

One last idea is that it gives them something to do. It's a hobby. Plus it's fun and it can make them happy.

In your conclusion, all you have to do is summarize your ideas/thoughts and restate your thesis in a strong, yet different way.


As for the website, I don't know any. Maybe look at the pinned topic in here?

I hope I was helpful.

[Spirited Away]

facts about art ...  example: how much many schools have art teachers ?

Check grammar.

What kind of info have you gathered so far?

One important point I wouldn't forget to add is that art is great tool for studying history. For example, during the French Revolution, art was an important tool in political propaganda. We can imply much about the sentiments of a people, in war or peace, through art of their time. One can also say that art is history. There are ancient drawings found in caves that explain way of life for people who have lived thousands of years before us.

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HELP ME PEOPLE ! please

For your introductory paragraph, you can state the ideas (duh)

Some ideas that releate to your topic is that it's a great stress reliever.  Students can put all their emotions on an easel, paper, whatever. That could make up one paragraph ..or substopic.

Another idea is that it allows people to express their creativity.  Some people express it through writing while others can draw/paint, etc. That could be another sub-topic.

One last idea is that it gives them something to do. It's a hobby.  Plus it's fun and it can make them happy. 

In your conclusion, all you have to do is summarize your ideas/thoughts and restate your thesis in a strong, yet different way.
As for the website, I don't know any.  Maybe look at the pinned topic in here?

I hope I was helpful. 

thank you ! it was very helpful !



uninspiredfae Posted May 9 2005, 9:00 PM

Check grammar.

What kind of info have you gathered so far?

One important point I wouldn't forget to add is that art is great tool for studying history. For example, during the French Revolution, art was an important tool in political propaganda. We can imply much about the sentiments of a people, in war or peace, through art of their time. One can also say that art is history. There are ancient drawings found in caves that explain way of life for people who have lived thousands of years before us.

thanks ALOT for providing infomations about the past and checking my grammer.