uhhmm RAP, (: Options

[akjsd]

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[sikdragon]

that sounds like that wack ass rhyme from marci-x.

funny tho.

[*nightmare4taki*]

That was pretty good for a first rap. Who knows maybe you will improve over time like Jason. His last couple of raps have been fantastic. This rap made me LOL, then LMAO, and then ROTFL.


Makes me wonder what Jason's going to come with.

[akjsd]

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[*nightmare4taki*]

lol no im laughing with you.

I have no clue who marci x is.

[*Statistik*]

Oh angie you've got to be kidding me//
She has gotten her diss on//
Now shes a R. Kelly victim about to get pissed on//
You can go ahead and put away your tension//
Just another Girl demanding attention//
Well Im going to have to teach you how to stunt//
Murder you lyrically and give you the publicity you want//
That was quite OUTRAGEOUS and COURAGEOUS of you//
Especially when I start lyrically KILLING you ,since no ones FEELING you//
Calling me a fake, man Im the real deal//
Leave you locked away like a Japanese seal//
Them boys don’t have to holla they can hit it ANYTIME//
I SHINE ,while you take backstrokes from BEHIND//
It doesn’t take to much for me to crack bones//
Have you repeating yourself more than Mike Jones//
Its funny since you quoted “this rap is not like me”//
You need to be kicked in the ass with a Nike//
Not a wannabe im a gonna be star//
You’ve lost control like a drunk at a bar//
So I Laugh MY Ass Off because that was too funny//
Go back to stripping, you’ll make more money//

[*videogamsta*]

nice rap lidoxangie im laughing with you not at you alight? it was awsome....

[akjsd]

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[*Statistik*]

An Infatuation with NIKE is so not LIKE ME//
Words come to blows and then you want to FIGHT ME//
Watch as Jason shows you how to DO THIS//
Show you that your rap is not the TRUEST//
I can be 50 and Em and make you Patiently wait for your lyrical death//
I do you like Destiny’s Child and make you lose your breath//
Watch the kid come through and rip//
Bring more juice than Jerry Curl drip//
No man nor Woman can dare f*ck with flowing//
Have you like the Energizer bunny, you keep going & going//
This rap right here is just a mere sample//
To bad I have to make you out of an example//
Whats with phunk are you from the Black eyed Peas//
Besides that, your flow is more sickening than a contagious disease//
Your rap is in need of improvement//
I start revolutions like the black panther movements//
So if you got skills you gone have to SHOW ME//
Because Im T.I. and you dont KNOW ME//
I'm trying to stay STRONG and stay SICK//
Don't get me wrong on DISS , so just lay off my d**k//

[*basick*]

the real roxanne

vs

roxanne chauntay

!!

[akjsd]

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[*videogamsta*]

dang but at least i didnt' rip rhymes from Cassidy . Dat right there was nice.

[miszSERENiTY]

Gooooo angie...haha Jason..you suck.

[*Statistik*]

Oh my, dear//
I make you look inferior//
U should bow down to your superior//
This time I will finish you fast//
Your image is more softer than a baby’s ass//
Put you in a CAST and make you half PAST dead//
Whoever told you that you were the best is outta of their head//
I keep it MOVING while you’ve been PROVING wrong//
You come up short because my d*ck is too long//
Your not down to ride with my lyrical homicide//
Slip and I slide and wipe you out completely like a genocide//
I got more heat than Dwyane Wade//
I do you like a Piano, you always get played//
Keep my piece but not peace when the drama start//
I will play you like the strings on a harp//
Matter of fact please play your part//
Because I do you like GAME and make you have a change of hart//
So like T.I. and Nelly girl lets get loose//
And after this battle we can call it a truce//

[x LUV x ALWAYS x]

this seems interesting *waits for outcome* nice rap at the beginning, angie (im not going to comment on the rest bc theres too many)

[akjsd]

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[sikdragon]

rhyming couplets.

[miszSERENiTY]

I keep it MOVING while you’ve been PROVING wrong//
You come up short because my d*ck is too long//

[/quote]
LOL...no.

[sikdragon]

yeah he's korean.... what does that mean.

[*Statistik*]

Haha yo angie
Im RUTHLESS and your flow is USELESS sh*t//
The TRUTH IS you can USE THIS advice to your benifit//
FLIPPING and RIPPING you while you fall and trip//
I can make you bleed like a blood, and crippled like a crip//
You trying to MOVE ME an PROVE ME wrong//
To bad I have to EMBARRASS and HARASS you on the same song//
Im LOVING everything I do while Im OVEN cooking you//
Stomp you like a insect at the bottom of my shoe//
Look people no copy and PASTE//
Give this girl a bad TASTE and put her to WASTE//
I practically own every season//
Call me the cops because I beat you for no reason//
You cant MOVE ME im like a MOVIE film//
Your girlfriends like “WHOSE HE, I think I like him”//

[*nightmare4taki*]

FLIPPING and RIPPING you while you fall and trip//
I can make you bleed like a blood, and crippled like a crip//

That was cold blooded. I love that line.

I practically own every season//
Call me the cops because I beat you for no reason//

OMG!!!! Thats the coldest line ive heard thus far in this thread.

How the heck did you improve this fast anyway?

[..:loveee.NuTTii]

RAP WARS!!!

*cough*
....jason-your getting good ^^

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

Haha yo angie
Im RUTHLESS and your flow is USELESS sh*t//
The TRUTH IS you can USE THIS advice to your benifit//
FLIPPING and RIPPING you while you fall and trip//
I can make you bleed like a blood, and crippled like a crip//
You trying to MOVE ME an PROVE ME wrong//
To bad I have to EMBARRASS and HARASS you on the same song//
Im LOVING everything I do while Im OVEN cooking you//
Stomp you like a insect at the bottom of my shoe//
Look people no copy and PASTE//
Give this girl a bad TASTE and put her to WASTE//
I practically own every season//
Call me the cops because I beat you for no reason//
You cant MOVE ME im like a MOVIE film//
Your girlfriends like “WHOSE HE, I think I like him”//

hahah gotta give it to jason hes improving XD basic DISS

is that all you got jason? dissin a girl
ima beat you lyrically and emotinally
make sure this isnt a forgotten memory
look at this guy thinking hes the sh*t
your as wack like 50 cent and g unit
still got no rhythm, still no flow
i aint trynna hate but you gotta go
the rap game is wack as it is
its you to blame for laying out a weak a$$ diss
the only thing you beat , was hittin your sh*t at night
no wonder your di*k is so small, you've been holdin it to tight
im to raw for you , might as well quit
just like how "The Game" left g-unit
i aint playing with you son this battle is mine
if you wanna battle again get your a$$ back in line
cuz once i start spittin these battles never stop
thats why you end up at the bottom while im on the top

[mocassinsx29]

Rap War indeed. I'm imagining all of you in this huge hip hop video clip. ^_^ And all your raps are pretty good.

[*Statistik*]

INTERFERENCE for my CLEARANCE is not allowed//
If you don’t get to MOVING while Im GROVING than your going to get plowed//
Your flow is fundamental and basic//
That why Im going to call you GTA because your about to get wasted//
Your nothing but CHICKEN~FEED, smoke ya like a pound of WEED, So you want be able to grow your SEED//
My flow is MAJOR~LEAGUE ,you can watch the PLAYER~LEAD, and MC SLAY~YOUR BREED//
This will make you MOVE~IT, Drive you like BUIK, while your saying DO~IT to me//
Get in FRONT~OF~ME, and try to STUNT~ON~ME, I will kill you before you can put a HUNT~ON~ME//
Your not my HOMIE ,so what the f*ck you want FROM~ME, you must want me to f*ck with your CHI and ENERGY//
Got this rap LOCKED like a GLOCK with the gun COCKED//
My rap is like a mixture of ROCK and HIP HOP//
Put you on HOLD, lets all ROCK~AND~ROLL while this Girlie gets TOLD//
Your selling your SOUL, Im taking CONTROL and leave you out to dry because your ICE~COLD//
Im to MUCH, Im like Omarion’s TOUCH, all the ladies want to grip my CLUTCH//
I come through it the CLUTCH, got the Balls and the NUTS, making entrances that rivals Starskey and HUTCH//

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

hah dude lol good sh*t jason PROPS doode

[akjsd]

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[T_R_G]

INTERFERENCE for my CLEARANCE is not allowed//
If you don’t get to MOVING while Im GROVING than your going to get plowed//
Your flow is fundamental and basic//
That why Im going to call you GTA because your about to get wasted//
Your nothing but CHICKEN~FEED, smoke ya like a pound of WEED, So you want be able to grow your SEED//
My flow is MAJOR~LEAGUE ,you can watch the PLAYER~LEAD, and MC SLAY~YOUR BREED//
This will make you MOVE~IT, Drive you like BUIK, while your saying DO~IT to me//
Get in FRONT~OF~ME, and try to STUNT~ON~ME, I will kill you before you can put a HUNT~ON~ME//
Your not my HOMIE ,so what the f*ck you want FROM~ME, you must want me to f*ck with your CHI and ENERGY//
Got this rap LOCKED like a GLOCK with the gun COCKED//
My rap is like a mixture of ROCK and HIP HOP//
Put you on HOLD, lets all ROCK~AND~ROLL while this Girlie gets TOLD//
Your selling your SOUL, Im taking CONTROL and leave you out to dry because your ICE~COLD//
Im to MUCH, Im like Omarion’s TOUCH, all the ladies want to grip my CLUTCH//
I come through it the CLUTCH, got the Balls and the NUTS, making entrances that rivals Starskey and HUTCH//

from what i know from you reading around and shit... there is no way in hell that you wrote that

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

jason started gettin` good so suddenly
when he started gettin` inspiration from me .
you may think that my rhymes are weak,
but shit boy, let the others speak .
according to most, you're a bitchass wangsta,
tryin` too come off hard, tryna look like a gangsta .
you're like the white f**k from Malibu's Most Wanted,
the more you front, the more your taunted .
if you want me to back off, then admit you're not the shit,
be a man wigga, dont throw a fit .
you talk the talk, but you cant walk the walk .
shit, i'm slicker than the noodles at Chinese Wok.
you're a disgrace jason so the korean community,
losing your DiGNiTY, tryin` to diss a girl like ME.
ima do it like 50 and massacre Y0U .
you're flow's as bad as your d**k is short .
tellin` off faggots like you, is like a sport .
stop thinkin` you're the shit, man, cuz NEWS FLASH, you're N0T !
your rap's as cold as the sun is hot .

... .. ... ..... .. .. ..... . .. ... .
jason, watsup with all the " ~ " in your last rap ? -___-

hahaha . fun stuff. anyways cb tricks, i might not be postin` in a while . preparin` for tennis tryouts is hard shit ! lols . but you guys can all hit me up on my sn if yah wanna keep in touch (: beby sm0kesz <3 peaceazyyy . [ L0LS ] & we can continue this shit later jason . lols .

aye yeah, and nice rap to that other dude that posted one (: i'm too lazy to write down your whole username =X

hahah thnx gyea its uhh dispn0ygonekrazy hahah well this is just for fun no offense aiight im juss playin wit the game =]


aiight yo fu*k jason its time to get at you
my rhymes gonna sick, confused, nuttin to do
your rhymes arent weak homie its just you
a stupid bitch who aint gotta clue
your raps are worser than jason i gotta admit
between you and him jason is the sh*t
you talk the talk and walk the walk?
bitch ima make you shut up while u sukin my co*k
i dont think, i know your ass weak
ya cant fu*k with me and my winnin streak
im on this, this sh*t is mine for the takin
bitch im sorry, but its me their feelin
i aint jason, im gonna be nice
but dont make me come back and beat yah twice

[*Statistik*]

Your MINE while I GRIND, and finish you in one LINE//
If you were a clock you wouldn’t be able to tell the TIME//
CLOCK~YOU, SHOCK~YOU, and KNOCK~YOU all around//
STOP~YOU, then POP~YOU, and let you know what’s going down//
No one more TIGHTER as I shine BRIGHTER and Burn like a Cigarette LIGHTER,
You SUFFER because Im more TUFFER as I punch you like street FIGHTER
Hot DAM, you wanna JAM, well here I AM,
Hemi like a dodge RAM, with power like Jean Claude Van DAM//
ISOMETRIC, im so ELECTRIC that you really gotta RESPECT~IT//
Put it TOGETHER no matter the WEATHER and stay well CON~NECTED//
Got them saying WHY~ME//
If YOU wanna mess more, FIGHT ME//
TRY~ME, and I will have you hooked to a IV//
It’s the LYRICAL MIRACLE on this thing once again//
I BEGIN and END all this nonsense with my 100 GRAND//
Wanksta, never, Baby Im the real deal//
By the time Im twenty im going to be sitting on a mill-//
-ion BUCKS and my TUX will equal big BUCKS//
All SHUCKS, you better DUCK, because I will hit you like a hockey PUCK//
Under~STAND, I am the MAN with the master PLAN//
KNIFE in my right, with your LIFE in my other HAND//

[loljuliana]

ahaha, that was great =) i like, i like xP
rofl is this amusing

[T_R_G]

Soooo Kangsta J... where did you steal these from?

[loljuliana]

hrmm.. i want to play along with this.
this is my first rap, laugh all you want. at least i tried
(btw--jason dont take this offensively, i erno why i'm directing this rap to you, but okay)

jason all your rhymes are wack
it's the skills i got, that you lack.
so go ahead, rap and do whatchu do
but in the end, you know that i'll rock you
you walk around, thinkin` you got class
but you know that we all be whoopin` your ass
yeah your rhymes are improving
but now i'm here, so you better get moving
i'm your queen, and this is my throne
better back off, because this is my zone

[/end rap]

yeah. .it's short. so sue me.

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

aiight jason i got you on this

uh oh another bitch just stepped in
once again its jason their dissin
this girl actually thinks she got class?
there would be none left after im done whoopin ur ass
better back the fu*k off if you dont wanna get played
cuz when i star spittin this battle is engaged
jason's rhymes arent wack, but theres something you lack
he got the balls to keep comin back for the attack
its ashame im dissin a girl who aint worth the time
comin out with raps like yours is a crime
ima wrap it up cuz this diss is done
cuz from the start this sh*t was already won

hahah NO offense right!! i got your back jason

[akjsd]

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[dispn0ygonekrazy]

XP HAHAHAH thnx this sh*t is fun

[*nightmare4taki*]

You know I had to join in on the fun. =)

Call me CONAN, Im the MAN, that can make your career sink faster than quick~SAND//
You need to get balanced like a bike without a KICKSTAND//
Is it so SUPRISING, Im RISING and so UNCOMPROMISING//
Gotta GO, With the FLOW, and make you all start REALIZING,,,//
That I really am the best when it comes to rocking mics//
Got more horsepower than a motor Bike//
Still Im not IMPRESSED with how you improperly ADRESSED me//
I warned you once, warned you twice really not to STRESS or TEST me//
Im about to get impetuous and a little TESTY//
With a verbal beating so bad that the cops wouldn’t want to ARREST~ME//
You can take it as words or you can take it more SERIOUS//
2 fast 2 FURIOUS, I touch and you go DELIRIOUS //
Now im PISSED, does it really have to come to THIS//
You can KISS~the~WRIST while I say move b*tch like Im LUDACRIS//

[akjsd]

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[*nightmare4taki*]

thx =). And that kiss the wrist kind of is a saying i guess. Its like showing off your jewelry on you wrist.

[akjsd]

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[miszSERENiTY]

Jason is definetly stealing lyrics again...

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

Srry nightmare4taki but i gotta do this =]

"move bitch" i think hes tryin to be ludacris
your sh*t is too weak to be considered a diss
are you really the best when you rockin the mics?
only thing you rock is when your fu**ing a dike
oops this b*tch is gon get testy, i can feel it
the feeling he gon get, cuz he cant belive it
its time you realize your rockin the wrong game
the way your going; i dont think anyone will notice your name
you gotta go with the flow and out like the rest
cuz this game is only fitted, fitted for the best
you can kiss the wrist and your career goodbye
have a good day bia*ch, ohhh and nice try

[*nightmare4taki*]

Srry nightmare4taki but i gotta do this =]

"move bitch" i think hes tryin to be ludacris
your sh*t is too weak to be considered a diss
are you really the best when you rockin the mics?
only thing you rock is when your fu**ing a dike
oops this b*tch is gon get testy, i can feel it
the feeling he gon get, cuz he cant belive it
its time you realize your rockin the wrong game
the way your going; i dont think anyone will notice your name
you gotta go with the flow and out like the rest
cuz this game is only fitted, fitted for the best
you can kiss the wrist and your career goodbye
have a good day bia*ch, ohhh and nice try

Nice flow .More fun

Nice TRY, GOODBYE. that flow didn't catch my EYE//
My lyrics are more deadly than a DRIVEBY//
Now its time for me to MASH on this TRASH//
You made a PASS at a flow that will assist you like Steve NASH//
Im the LOC~NESS, I ROCK~BEST, Now try and STOP~THIS//
If Nas was your ghostwriter you couldn't even TOP~THIS//
Im so FLY, Who am I, the one thats smooth without a TRY//
So HI-FI, I can make these other thugs CRY//
I hold it STEADY, for Those who aren't READY to feel the wrath//
EXPOSE THOSE who OPPOSE and make em see a lyrical bloodbath//
Now where have your skills went//
I will Massacare you without a 50 Cent//

[WinterNights2]

An Infatuation with NIKE is so not LIKE ME//
Words come to blows and then you want to FIGHT ME//
Watch as Jason shows you how to DO THIS//
Show you that your rap is not the TRUEST//
I can be 50 and Em and make you Patiently wait for your lyrical death//
I do you like Destiny’s Child and make you lose your breath//
Watch the kid come through and rip//
Bring more juice than Jerry Curl drip//
No man nor Woman can dare f*ck with flowing//
Have you like the Energizer bunny, you keep going & going//
This rap right here is just a mere sample//
To bad I have to make you out of an example//
Whats with phunk are you from the Black eyed Peas//
Besides that, your flow is more sickening than a contagious disease//
Your rap is in need of improvement//
I start revolutions like the black panther movements//
So if you got skills you gone have to SHOW ME//
Because Im T.I. and you dont KNOW ME//
I'm trying to stay STRONG and stay SICK//
Don't get me wrong on DISS , so just lay off my d**k//

Jason, your white. Don't ever mention the Black Panther movement again or I will be forced to school your sorry ass. Saying to get off my d**k is a diss to yourself, moron.

[*Statistik*]

my sorry ass?? hahaha f**k up dude

[sikdragon]

so everyone not black is white? im sorry, but he's asian genius.

[*Statistik*]

From the rich and the POOR, to the soft and HARDCORE//
The ladies always want me on the DANCE FLOOR//
These girls always tell me “TEASE~ME and PLEASE ~ME” //
I have to tell them “girls please take it EASY”//
Im like Webster’s DICTION~ARY, its so SCARY, now whose the girl im going to MARRY//
So ROWDY, HOs CROWD~ME and tell me they can be my Halle BERRY//
So smooth WITH~IT, as I SPIT~IT so these other suckers can GET~IT and Understanded//
So highly DEMANDED, you cant STAND~IT, when I invade your territory and take over you land//
Yes Im BACK, I will ATTACK, those who don’t acknowledge the FACTS/
My flow is PURE, I will ENDURE, and shoot em like im T MAC// <-----------Tracy Mcgrady
For what its WORTH, Since my BIRTH I’ve been on this EARTH//
You got the nerve to try to STAGGER my SWAGGER and take over my TURF//
It isn’t going to HAPPEN, while Im RAPPING and doing my thing//
Do this with PASSION, while peoples CLASHING with the king//
You try PREVENTION and INTERVENTION to try to calm me down//
My flow has to many EXTENSIONS and DIMENSIONS for you to hold me down//
I make THE whole fans go crazy outside of the city and town//

[HongKongDong]

Man... you are definitely stealing this shit....

[*Statistik*]

^dude...im honest..im telling the truth..from my great grandmother's graveyard..i did not steal those raps..im just improving..i promise..is it that hard to believe? just stop please..i dont wanna swear..but please, im being honest. i did not steal the lines.

[HongKongDong]

Hell yeah its hard to believe... especially when part of your rap is from T.I.

So if you got skills you gone have to SHOW ME//
Because Im T.I. and you dont KNOW ME//
I'm trying to stay STRONG and stay SICK//
Don't get me wrong on DISS , so just lay off my d**k//

I can be 50 and Em and make you Patiently wait for your lyrical death//
I do you like Destiny’s Child and make you lose your breath//
Watch the kid come through and rip//
Bring more juice than Jerry Curl drip//

^^That is in a freestyle diss song to the aftermath...

Not sure about the others... i guess i could check on them... but nice try man :-D

[azn_r4pf4n]

Hell yeah its hard to believe... especially when part of your rap is from T.I.

So if you got skills you gone have to SHOW ME//
Because Im T.I. and you dont KNOW ME//
I'm trying to stay STRONG and stay SICK//
Don't get me wrong on DISS , so just lay off my d**k//

ahaha... didn't notice that for a second.

[HongKongDong]

Notice as how the kid doesn't respond... tsk tsk Jason

[*Statistik*]

Dude, i didnt copy 1 line out of all those raps. just stop.

[HongKongDong]

Dude, i didnt copy 1 line out of all those raps. just stop.

BITCH THESE LINES ARE FROM T.I.'s "You dont know me" song

So if you got skills you gone have to SHOW ME//
Because Im T.I. and you dont KNOW ME//
I'm trying to stay STRONG and stay SICK//
Don't get me wrong on DISS , so just lay off my d**k//

Damn man... what the f**k are you trying to pull... if I were in your place I would be laughing my ass off as to how I got these people... so I guess I shouldn't get pissed off

[*Statistik*]

no theyre not..google it..and gimmie the proof

[HongKongDong]

HAHAHAHAHAHA oh man... this kid is asking for a plate of humiliation... ill be right back

[*Statistik*]

So if you got skills you gone have to SHOW ME//

^is that from you dont know me?? no.

I'm trying to stay STRONG and stay SICK//
Don't get me wrong on DISS , so just lay off my d**k//

^no.

//EDIT: this mother f**ker has serious problems.

These are the "lyrics" from T.I.-you dont know me:

You might've seen me in the streets,
but nigga you dont know me
When you holla when you speak,
remember you dont know me
Save all that hatin and tha poppin
Nigga you don’t know me
Quit tellin Niggaz youz my partner nigga
you don't know me
Don't be a groupie keep it movin,
nigga you dont know me
Hey I aint trippin cuz the truth is really,
you dont know me
Yeah you know they call me T.I.
but you dont know me
You be hatin an i see why
cause you dont know me

(verse)
I think its time I made a song for niggas who dont know me
I graduated out the streets, Ima real O.G.
I been trappin shootin pistols since I stood 4 feet
So all you niggas actin bad you gone have to show me
You gon' make me bring the Chevy to a real slow creep
My niggas hangin out the window mouth full of gold teeth
When the guns start poppin wonder when its gone cease
Chopper hit you in the side an create a slow leak
We been in the speculation but today we gone see
Whats the future of a P**sy nigga hatin on me
I give a f**k about the fed's investigation on me
I don't care that they at my shows and they waitin on me
Ima keep on flossin poppin long as Toomp is on the beat
Tell polices i aint stoppin Ima keep it in the streets
Contrary to your beliefs I'm as real as you can be
So f**k ya thoughts and ya feelings nigga you dont know me

Chorus 1x

(Verse 2)
Once again let me remind you nigga you don't know me So dont be walkin up and asking whats the deal on a key
I dont know if you wearing wires you could be the police
If I was slangin blow you couldn't get a O.Z.
See me and the PSC fallin through at a show deep
Police holdin up the door cause they know we tote heat
I jus wanna ride wit C, blowin dro in the fleet
Or wit clan by the dozen different bitches in a week
I jus wanna chill wit Kuntry an his daddy Freddie G
Ballin out at anytime at any store and spend a G
I wanna ball in the Bahamas courtesy of K.T.
MacBoney gotta mill well as Dolla D.P.
A.K. house on the hill right next to J.G.
Every week meet at a falant restaurant and eat free
Get Inda paid, Lil Greg and B.
Thats the only shot we got at gettin Cap back on the streets

(hook)
you see a nigga hating on a G
ask him what it's gonna be
What you lookin at P**sy nigga you don't know me
At the club and the streets- or wherever we should meet
Its choppers chopping, pistols popping,
Nigga you don’t know me



you see a nigga hating on a G
ask him what it's gon be
What you lookin at P**sy nigga you don't no me
At the club and the streets- or wherever we should meet
Its choppers chopping, pistol popping,
Nigga you don’t know me



DO YOU SEE ANY OF THE SHIT I WROTE IN THERE??? i dont. stfu

[azn_r4pf4n]

^ but you claimed u were t.i.

[HongKongDong]

Oh shit, yeah I hit it up... i thought I heard those verses in the song... damn man... so who's there that you got writing this shit for you? Serious man, there is no way in hell you wrote that. One, you dont type like that, you never put down the "//" after each line, you are known for doing such things... and the raps that maybe... just maybe were actually yours... were just straight out whack. This improvement is too much, its like impossible unless you pulled out a Hyperbolic Time Chamber and practiced for 2 years.

This is obviously not yours... maybe im just being stubborn and biased but seriously... this cant be your shit.

[*Statistik*]

it is though..im not lying..i dont wanna lie and i wont lie..

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

cmon yall give the guy a break shit thats freakin crazy whatever he writes all off yall well most of yall gotta see if hes lying or stealing...shiet for once man complicate his work jason doode i feel yah man i got you bro

[HongKongDong]

Thats what I want to do but its high unbelievable... I mean this all happens in less then a month, its way too unbelievable... I want to give this kid a break but something just keeps saying that shit isn't his. Its just not his style... its just too much...

[sikdragon]

It's still wack.

[*nightmare4taki*]

Jason's new raps are amazing.

[sikdragon]

Try listening to underground rap, not this mainstream wack shit. no beef with 2pac he's still the best.

[*basick*]

Thats what I want to do but its high unbelievable... I mean this all happens in less then a month, its way too unbelievable... I want to give this kid a break but something just keeps saying that shit isn't his. Its just not his style... its just too much...

nah just leave it du... i really believe jason writes his own shit now... lol... hes still wack IMO but at least he isnt a biter... keep it up

One, you dont type like that, you never put down the "//" after each line, you are known for doing such things...

yo son its just text... people switch up their "flow" more often than the yankees lose nowadays... no big deal...


funky buddah you just made a fool out of yourself at least have facts to back up your claims...


by jason

[*nightmare4taki*]

And so I ask myself why am I really doing this.

Strike you QUICK, the flow is SICK, If you were tape you couldn’t STICK with~me//
The flow is RUGGED, the way I THUG~IT, so many haters want to get~me
So REAL, How I FEEL, and KILL the Mic. in the booth//
If you had eyes you still would be blinded by the truth//
They cant believe its ME, the real MC , that will put you in a daze//
I never FAKE~IT, when I TAKE~IT to another phase//
Cause DEVASTATION, to your NATION, and play you like a PLAYSTATION//
Wipe out your GENERATION, with no DEVIATION of the IMMITATION//
Im like M. Jackson’s THRILLER, the mic KILLER, with more drive than 4 WHEELERS//
King of CATASTROPHE, yes im your MAJESTY with Steal like the STEELERS//
Bring the PAIN, until you cant SUSTAIN the beating that I BRANG to this THANG //
You cant REMAIN when I spit my GAME because I live Life in the Fast LANE//
Its just AMAZIN, how this man has got the beat BLAZIN//
So much PERSUASION to the OCCASION that the gods above is PRAISING//
I pick up where you STARTED, after you DEPARTED, so I can be top CHARTED//
with No PROPS, no DROPS but I know Im highly REGARDED//
I got big WHEELS, Dollar BILLS which equals major SKILLS//
I got it locked, got it SEALED, without a major DEAL//
Your boy is BACK, but never WACK, Heavily Heated, just call me SHAQ//
Doing it BIG, It’s the KID with skills that never LACK//
Yes I SHINE, and for those who are BEHIND, Im ahead of my TIME//
Its my TIME, Im in my PRIME, you can say Im Rap’s Albert EINSTEIN//

[sikdragon]

lyrically egotistical, blazin outta princible-
you gotta a lot a nerve to think you can serve-
anything, just a simple wack transition between y'all-
as down as you claim to be, you're too clean y'all-
kinda like taking a step backwards-
when you rhyme to be like mc edwards-
asian stuck in inflation up in tha suburbs-
wearin' your high priced gangsta out fit-
it's kinda sad when you thinka bout it-
that y'all are so cool, ha! i kinda doubt it-
jason is the reason we keepin the diss ant alive-
i'm comparin' y'all to an aerosal can when you drive-
in your rich ass mercedes, you let out a lot of hot air-
when it comes to the ladies-
no truth or honor found in you at all, you live with your mouth-
cuz you left your roots in the south, you talk the walk-
but get caught in an outline of chalk-
your body lay where your words say-
dead in the middle of the street, but hey-
you used to flow, so what now?
you gonna pistol whip me, grab me by the face pretend to hit me-
and cry when i dont fall, you dont faze me, you must be crazy-
to think that your weak ass rhymes impress anyone, when they lazy-
it's like you're just racing, to get lines that find the rhyme with bitch-
but the OG's mean more than this, but since they day, rap has b'come nothing more than a get rich quick scheme-
left the real dream dead and bloodied up the ravine-
hope's lost for this generation of baby's mamas wit no daddies at home-
more interest in tha pimps wit they limps and they caddies 'n chrome-
so it doesnt matter that your boys splatter, when ya go bust up somebody else-
we all the same, pulling against the same grain and still we just watch the plane crash into the towers-
although we have the power to end the tragedy-
stop the hate instead of just imagining-
but you dont care, it doesnt matter where the babies sleep-
it doesnt matter that they grew up on the street-
it doesnt matter that they only family is they crew-
it doesnt matter because it all started with you-
you gots ta get yours-
so keep rhyming your wack rhymes and keep perpetuating the hate crimes-
it's your life live it or dont, cuz all those people who you look past are staring back into your eyes in perpetual size wondering your next move-
you gonna step back and do as you say, or you gonna keep frontin' the groove and catch your aids-
it dont matter, cuz you aint real, so there's nothing to feel-
keep your rhyme and rythm, keep your libertarianism-
keep your self help and work for me plan-
i want none of it, cuz your lyin' to me man-

[jnukes]

tha only way we'll prove that jason isn't a fake, is if we all hook up mics and hear him freestyle or something ..

[*Statistik*]

It seems these BITCHES are getting SUSPICIOUS because my flow pops like SWITCHES//
I'll take you down farther, with some few more PITCHES//
I take your MRS, because she know I got the game sewed up like STITCHES//
My attitude is so VARIOUS you would have thought I was DARIUS miles//
This is FREESTYLE, you know its so WILD, with the information I COMPILE//
Im an Over ACHIEVER, I persevere and ENDEAVOR because my flow is hotter than a FEVER//
Im the oven HEATER, Your girl, I don’t NEED~HER, it doesn’t take much for me to LEAVE~HER //
I got these Hos skinny DIPPIN, bras im RIPPIN, while the beat is never SKIPPIN//
You all must be TRIPPIN, while Im still TIPPIN and throwing up deuces like Scottie PIPPEN//
Hit you like POLO, with a shot like HAN SOLO, but I will Darth Maul~you//
And for those who don’t like me, a hater is what they should Call~you//
It really quiet SIMPLE, Just welcome to my TEMPLE and witness me bust the mic wide open like a PIMPLE//
I do this QUICK and ACCURATE as I move so NIMBLE//
Its no problem for us to go MANO Y MANO//
Because I will play you like Alicia Keys plays the PIANO//
The flow is so FABULOUS that im so HAZARDOUS to your health//
Speakers still BLASTIN, with movments like an ASSASSIN with stealth//
Knock them SILLY ,Pop them like a WILLY, before they can KILL~ME//
The Ice on my wrist makes the room CHILLY so now you gotta FEEL~ME//

[WinterNights2]

My rhymes are covered in blood as I guned down the GREATS// Too bad I'm already making a record deal with people at the GOLDEN GATES//I don't spare lives in battles I always ASSASINATE//Do i rap to fast, can you even CONTEMPLATE//Too bad at your autposy you cant afford a colored PORTRAIT // If your rap was an amoeba it would be trying to SEPERATE//
roll to the murder scene it's IMMACULATE your not a rapper stop trying to PERPATRATE//
If i stole lines like jason I'd be a begineers CARBONCOPY I took more shots then tupacs car they CANT DROP ME//
Your afraid you cant win you can't LAST IT// After im done you'll sleep IN A CASKET
You went to the ghetto to see your "homies" you got your ASS KICKED
Listen to my rhymes and I'll leave you an ADDICT// I listen to rhymes on the radio station all i hear is STATIC// my rebuttltes and K.O's are like Obesity in Americans is always AUTOMATIC// You Can't beat me I'm always direct and MERCILESS// everyone fears me because I'm MUDEROURS//I'll tell you agian I bet you've HEARD OF THIS// You say you chill the room with your so called ICE// you couldn't afford it in the first place dont say were bitches TWICE//If your taking us down with PITCHES// I'll leave you in pieces with STITCHES//The only Bras you been RIPPIN// Is your moms ofcourse thats why you been Trickin//If your Darth Maul then I'm OBI ONE KANOBI// Atleast I'm not stealing lines from T.I's YOU DON't KNOW ME//Jason your a plain waste of TIME all you do is steal RHYMES// Your talking on the phone to clay aiken trying to make your flows TIGHTER/ To bad you aint wrote your shit you hired a ghost WRITER//Jason your not an Over ACHIVER you share a splitting resemblance to that kid from LEAVE IT TO BEAVER//If you spread fever then I'm the MEDICINE Jason guess what I just plain schooled you AGAIN.

Ahh well its my first multi-rhyme per sentance. I normally stick with like 2 a sentance.

[akjsd]

------

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

My rhymes are covered in blood as I guned down the GREATS// Too bad I'm already making a record deal with people at the GOLDEN GATES//I don't spare lives in battles I  always ASSASINATE//Do i rap to fast, can you even CONTEMPLATE//Too bad at your autposy you cant afford a colored PORTRAIT // If your rap was an amoeba it would be trying to SEPERATE//
roll to the murder scene it's IMMACULATE your not a rapper stop trying to PERPATRATE//
If i stole lines like jason I'd be a begineers CARBONCOPY I took more shots then tupacs car they CANT DROP ME//
Your afraid you cant win you can't LAST IT// After im done you'll sleep IN A CASKET
You went to the ghetto to see your "homies" you got your ASS KICKED
Listen to my rhymes and I'll leave you an ADDICT// I listen to rhymes on the radio station all i hear is STATIC// my rebuttltes and K.O's are like Obesity in Americans is always AUTOMATIC// You Can't beat me I'm always direct and MERCILESS// everyone fears me because I'm MUDEROURS//I'll tell you agian I bet you've HEARD OF THIS// You say you chill the room with your so called ICE// you couldn't afford it in the first place dont say were bitches TWICE//If your taking us down with PITCHES// I'll leave you in pieces with STITCHES//The only Bras you been RIPPIN// Is your moms ofcourse thats why you been Trickin//If your Darth Maul then I'm OBI ONE KANOBI// Atleast I'm not stealing lines from T.I's YOU DON't KNOW ME//Jason your a plain waste of TIME all you do is steal RHYMES// Your talking on the phone to clay aiken trying to make your flows TIGHTER/ To bad you aint wrote your shit you hired a ghost WRITER//Jason your not an Over ACHIVER you share a splitting resemblance to that kid from LEAVE IT TO BEAVER//If you spread fever then I'm the MEDICINE Jason guess what I just plain schooled you AGAIN.

Ahh well its my first multi-rhyme per sentance. I normally stick with like 2 a sentance.

now this sh*t was legitemate i enjoyed it he came out with harder punchlines than jason, and your verses were flawless the darth maul and ben kenobi lol that sh*t was crackin good sh*t

[sweet_devil]

These girls always tell me “TEASE~ME and PLEASE ~ME” //
I have to tell them “girls please take it EASY”//

not sure, but aren't those lines in the song My Band by D12?

[sweet_devil]

sry, my mistake u didn't steal any lyrics...

[*Statistik*]

^no.

[*basick*]

shaking my head at these online detectives

[sikdragon]

Shaking my head at these blind posers.

[*CrackedRearView*]

My, my, I thought we would never see you again//
After Roxy tagged shameful, bloody "R" on your skin//
But who knows? Maybe it was just a brand on your ass//
Maybe you needed to come and lose some more of your class//
But man, I'm proud, even I wouldn't show up in this place//
After I just had my hopes and dreams transformed to disgrace//
You're like a little cockroach, comin' back every week//
Runnin' in and out of cB, playin' hide-and-go-seek//
All you need is one good crush, one good stomp on the head//
That's all it takes to make your mama's tears begin to be shed//
Or would she cry? Would she even give a second cognition?//
Would anybody give a f**k? Anyone show recognition?//
I say no, I don't think anyone would be broken hearted//
We'd all rejoice, rejoice, your wack ass raps have finally parted!//
Say it again, loud and proud -- rejoice, rejoice!//
THANK GOD, this bitch is gone, and he's lost his voice!//

[iixSOOJINx]

lols. nice rap. it rhymes and actually has a point in it, not like the other raps saying " i like to _____ hoes and bitches." < which are pointless.

[*Statistik*]

Yo i'm gonna end this BATTLE, no time to WASTE//
Take these lines, and give it a TASTE//
Im not going to run and hide, Im going to stand tall and stand FIRM//
Why the f*ck is this man using these psychology TERMS//
Well I will let everyone witness the bystander EFFECT~WITH~ME//
If you were a phone you couldn’t CONNECT~WITH~ME///
If I saw your girl I would turn her around and then SLAP~HER on her ass//
Look everyone I’ve turned CRV into an inspiring RAPPER that fast//
I have to admit CRV your last rap was a little clever//
But you getting rid of me is like exterminating roaches forever//
It isn’t going to happen no time in the future nor the present//
I hate to brag but im so damn effervescent//
My flow is so damn Vivacious and ENTHUSIASTIC that you know its CLASSIC //
Im not even going to comment on WINTERKNIGHTES rap, because it wasn’t that drastic//
Why does everyone wish to DEVASTATE~ME//
Like I said they love me but pretend to HATE~ME//
So why can’t these rappers diss anyone else on this forum thing//
Its because they thought they were the ace but their lower than a king//
In other words they softer than the sh*t I wipe my ass with//
And everything they say is nothing but Bull Sh*t//

[sikdragon]

lols. nice rap. it rhymes and actually has a point in it, not like the other raps saying " i like to _____ hoes and bitches." <  which are pointless.

thanks

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

Yo i'm gonna end this BATTLE, no time to WASTE//
Take these lines, and give it a TASTE//
Im not going to run and hide, Im going to stand tall and stand FIRM//
Why the f*ck is this man using these psychology TERMS//
Well I will let everyone witness the bystander EFFECT~WITH~ME//
If you were a phone you couldn’t CONNECT~WITH~ME///
If I saw your girl I would turn her around and then SLAP~HER on her ass//
Look everyone I’ve turned CRV into an inspiring RAPPER that fast//
I have to admit CRV your last rap was a little clever//
But you getting rid of me is like exterminating roaches forever//
It isn’t going to happen no time in the future nor the present//
I hate to brag but im so damn effervescent//
My flow is so damn Vivacious and ENTHUSIASTIC that you know its CLASSIC //
Im not even going to comment on WINTERKNIGHTES rap, because it wasn’t that drastic//
Why does everyone wish to DEVASTATE~ME//
Like I said they love me but pretend to HATE~ME//
So why can’t these rappers diss anyone else on this forum thing//
Its because they thought they were the ace but their lower than a king//
In other words they softer than the sh*t I wipe my ass with//
And everything they say is nothing but Bull Sh*t//

naw jason dude wasnt feeling it you've written better ones but this one was just not too great, it seems like your focusing on a main idea which isnt bad but the same thing over and over again man?? naw your creative, use it.