fairytale, i made this poem |
 May 6 2005, 04:19 AM
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i posted it in my fictionpress account... hope you'll love it!
entitled fairytale Fantasies As well as Foes Here lurking Ready to steal my hopes Cradle me oh mother I can see the black tail Bring me to a fairytale Where happy endings never end Kiss me oh my prince Im not your poison frog, Just take my hand We will dance in the clouds No knight came Stepsisters march in Smiling wickedly My heart thumped rapidly Bite the apple my dear The foxes are running with fear You are safe but taste this red Vanish your shame and hatred Sweet dreams take me now Dont wake me in this slumber The old witch is here Burning me deep, I surrender Tower of darkness Dragons and nothingness No magical wands to save me My fairygod mother forsaken me Now, prisoner of shadows Let me out, the crystal shoe is broken Tears are gold, turning into an old Nobody is here, another story foretold |
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| *not_your_average* |
May 6 2005, 09:33 PM
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waaay cool poem. i love it! a few spelling errors, but i like the concept.
QUOTE Sweet dreams take me now Dont wake me in this slumber The old witch is here Burning me deep, I surrender that's my absolute fave stanza. 
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| *Kathleen* |
May 7 2005, 05:03 PM
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^ Same about the spelling errors. Regardless, I agree - the concept of it is great! I've never read anything about fairytales before in actual poetry.
 That's great, though!
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May 11 2005, 09:05 PM
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come and get me! Group: Member Posts: 190 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 113,600 |
thanks guys!
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