another poem, meh |
 May 4 2005, 12:34 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
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of depression quick succession rapid blows to the side of the head dead down out in out in out shake it all about turn the f**k around and start again in the ashes of your passion ofyou cash in the cheque bounced so pay again cause life wont take an IOU deserve it preserve it not worth it deep as the surface still waters run nowhere ***** hmm... im not entirely convinced... |
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| *stephinika* |
May 4 2005, 01:15 PM
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james, ilu. seriously. everything you write seems to flow and come together so well.
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May 4 2005, 01:57 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
why thank you... i think its b/c i just make most stuff up as i type it into the computer... its just the way my mind fits together
= ) i rather like it now that i read it a second time. not my favorite piece, tho |
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