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 Apr 29 2005, 12:17 AM
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 LiLaZnGurL  Group: Member Posts: 969 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,072  |
QUOTE One night a guy and girl was driving home from the movies the boy sensed there was something wrong becuz of the painful silence they shared between them that night the boy pulled over becuz hewated to talk he told that his feelings had changed and that it was time time move on a silent tear slid down her cheek as he slowly reach into her pocket and passed him a folded note at the moment ad drunk driver was speeding down that very same street he swerved right into the drivers seat, killing the girl, mieraculosly, the boy survived remembering the note, he pulled it out and read it "without your love, I would die" some ppl might have read thos before |
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Apr 29 2005, 01:23 AM
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 A.K.A. Simplicityxx Group: Member Posts: 1,878 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 56,813 |
hmm.. somewhat ironic.. but thats still sad.
I can't stand the fact that it has no punctuation marks, whatsoever. I had to re-read it several times. |
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Apr 29 2005, 02:26 AM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
aww..thats sad..
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Apr 29 2005, 02:29 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Wow that really is sad =( Ironic, like simplicty said, but sad. My heart started hurting when i got to the, "my feelings have changed" part.
Maybe this should go into the writing forum, i've read other stories like this in there. and yah that is kinda weird that there are no punctuation marks whatsoever, maybe you should fix that lol. |
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Apr 29 2005, 04:47 AM
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 boo Group: Member Posts: 5,512 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,765 |
QUOTE(simplicityxx @ Apr 29 2005, 1:23 AM) I can't stand the fact that it has no punctuation marks, whatsoever. I had to re-read it several times.  Agreed. Yeah, kinda sad too. |
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Apr 29 2005, 09:07 AM
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 rainy days fade away.. Group: Member Posts: 566 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 58,261 |
awww i read this before and it's sad every single time i read it =(
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Apr 29 2005, 09:32 AM
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 yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
aww...that's so sad. but yeah, it should be either in the writing forum or the relationship forum i think.
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Apr 29 2005, 11:26 AM
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 The windmills of your mind .. Group: Member Posts: 1,317 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 83,699 |
It was kinda sad
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Apr 29 2005, 12:35 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 75 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 130,868 |
Stories like that creep me out
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Apr 29 2005, 12:40 PM
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 aiko Nakamura at your service Group: Member Posts: 1,518 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,144 |
gak! it made me sad and yea it was pretty ironic
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Apr 29 2005, 12:46 PM
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 Je vous aime Group: Member Posts: 361 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 109,078 |
Very Ironic..
But still sad.. Love sucks, dont it? |
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Apr 29 2005, 01:03 PM
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i saw this on a myspace bulletin, it made me sigh
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Apr 29 2005, 01:19 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
wow. .that's sad and ironic. and yeah, i had to read it over a couple times because of the puncuation (sp?).
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| *iNyCxShoRT* |
Apr 29 2005, 01:25 PM
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oh man i read that on my friends xanga before and that is so sad. but that`s realy ironic and scary at the same time o_O
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Apr 29 2005, 01:28 PM
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 crushed. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,432 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,026 |
 what a sad story. QUOTE silent tear slid down her cheek as she slowly reach into her pocket and passed him a folded note first I thought the guy passed her a note.. |
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Apr 29 2005, 01:33 PM
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 Ah, mon Dieu ! Group: Member Posts: 2,274 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,587 |
the terrible grammar kinda ruins the whole "sad" mood...
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Apr 29 2005, 01:37 PM
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 creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
haha :( i regret reading this topic now it totally has changed my content and relaxed mood
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Apr 29 2005, 01:49 PM
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I'm Cattt. :] Group: Validating Posts: 1,722 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 130,831 |
that was kinda ironic in a way that it became disturbing to me
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Apr 29 2005, 06:52 PM
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 ...and this is me.. Group: Member Posts: 3,518 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 57,899 |
It's a sad story...but the grammar ruined some parts in it...
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Apr 29 2005, 06:53 PM
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 that heaven is overrated Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
Wow, that is sad.
But...why are people all of a sudden starting to post these random sad stories? x_X |
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Apr 29 2005, 06:57 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 4,357 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,115 |
There are a lot of sad stories. I know plenty. But yes, it was sad nonetheless. But it needs better grammar. I didn't really get it.
QUOTE as he slowly reach into her pocket and passed him a folded note why would the guy reach into the girl's pocket when he's driving? |
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Apr 29 2005, 07:21 PM
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 whaaaaaaat? Group: Member Posts: 2,293 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,660 |
man, that was poorly written. had to read it a couple of times to get it. it's sad, but ironic. love bites u in the ass doesn't it.
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Apr 29 2005, 07:24 PM
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QUOTE as he slowly reach into her pocket and passed him a folded note Wait...that didn't make sense . I don't understand why there were no periods in that paragraph, but anyway....Sad story. It reminds me of the story where there was a couple in motorcycle and his brakes broke or something....anyway, sad. 
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Apr 29 2005, 07:28 PM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
I've read it before. :[ It's so sad.
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Apr 29 2005, 07:38 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,881 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 132,134 |
those things are so sad.
imaging my self in that place. |
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