sunset beach, also a poem... |
 Apr 9 2004, 03:29 PM
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 x mar muffins *yuuuum  Group: Member Posts: 874 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,620  |
 a poem I wrote a few weeks ago... dedicated to michael |
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Apr 9 2004, 03:47 PM
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 unify and defeat... divide and crumble Group: Member Posts: 2,759 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,379 |
that's really sweet... excuse me while i go and cry... *sob*
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Apr 9 2004, 04:55 PM
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x mar muffins *yuuuum Group: Member Posts: 874 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,620 |
aww gee, thanks! but no need to cry! hell never see me the way I see him
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Apr 9 2004, 05:15 PM
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 BOO! Group: Member Posts: 136 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,542 |
So sweet, i wanna cry too
Ill try to hold it in.
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Apr 9 2004, 05:49 PM
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Nice poem; awesome background, btw.
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Apr 9 2004, 06:20 PM
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 Retired Posting Whore Group: Member Posts: 699 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 2,911 |
lovely!
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Apr 9 2004, 06:26 PM
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That was beautiful... - Chinkieeyedpnoi |
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Apr 9 2004, 07:07 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,077 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,904 |
That's so sweet. But I'm not gonna cry or my contacts will just pop right out lol...
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Apr 9 2004, 11:37 PM
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 ilikeyouSofreakingmuch. Group: Member Posts: 2,014 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 643 |
The poem is so pretty! Plus the background!!
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Apr 9 2004, 11:44 PM
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 durian Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,124 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,860 |
aww, that's so sweet and sad
It reminds me of ALL those fanfictions (Korean, preferrably) that are all about the oppa who loves his dongseng or something and you know, they think that the other only loves them as a friend.. *sigh*
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Apr 10 2004, 12:49 AM
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x mar muffins *yuuuum Group: Member Posts: 874 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,620 |
hey, now that I think about that, you are right christina!
 but how sad
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Apr 10 2004, 12:52 AM
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 Serious As A Heart Attack. Group: Member Posts: 2,292 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,344 |
aww..very cute..
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Apr 10 2004, 04:04 AM
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x mar muffins *yuuuum Group: Member Posts: 874 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,620 |
I feel sad all over again
 this sucks haha
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Apr 10 2004, 09:01 AM
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 Mz Nina Nikole Group: Member Posts: 1,343 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,273 |
i love the last verse...
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Apr 10 2004, 04:03 PM
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 >>LILY<< Group: Member Posts: 276 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,632 |
Ohh...Nice poem...
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Apr 10 2004, 08:19 PM
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 Some 1 plz find me, help me find my way..my way bak 2 bliss Group: Member Posts: 288 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,748 |
i think im gonna go cry now
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Apr 10 2004, 09:39 PM
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 Hi! I'm Dani :) Group: Member Posts: 5,637 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,369 |
that poem ish beautiful, i think im gna cry too
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Apr 10 2004, 09:44 PM
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 Coolerator Group: Member Posts: 413 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,442 |
Every1 lets cry together (where the heck is the ground cry...)
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Apr 10 2004, 11:16 PM
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I..need...tissues... |
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Apr 10 2004, 11:18 PM
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 juicy Group: Member Posts: 28 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,526 |
that's really a nice poem, & i myself write poems. yay
u get a million-billion-trillion-jillion-etc. props for that poem, very pretty ::tears::
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Apr 11 2004, 01:07 AM
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x mar muffins *yuuuum Group: Member Posts: 874 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,620 |
:biggrin:wow, thanks everyone for the wonderful feedback, I wrote this poem for my language arts class, and I even showed it to the guy I wrote it about, at first he didn't get what I was saying, and then he got it, and was really surprised! ergh
 now he has someone else next to him, but its okay... i guess, haha i'll go cry some more j/k...hes my friend still, thats all well ever be *sigh
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