I'll Get You Back Options

[akjsd]

screams, shouts, yells, cries,
gasps, cuts, surrending sighs .
fake smiles, mourning eyes,
never stops, unending lies .

rumours spread, like butter on toast,
but one thing's forsure, i hate you most .
sure, hate is strong,
but this aint wrong .

if i could, i'd break your bones,
why cant you all just leave me alone .
beat me, hit me, use and abuse me,
all this attention makes me see clearly .

you're not who i thought you were,
things like this happens in such a blur .
untold secrets and flaming betrayals,
this is when our friendship fails .

you thought that you could bring me down ?
turn my bright smile into a frown ?
tear me apart, piece by piece ?
but you dont hurt me, not the least .

i'm stronger than you think,
i'm a harder ship to sink .
i'll forgive, but never forget,
i wont stop, till the score is set .

i'll paste a smile on my face,
but inside, i'm thinkin` of what took place .
i'll get you back, this i swear ,
and my pain, we'll all share .

[loljuliana]

I love it. It flows nicely. I like the way you sorta. .listed a few things.
At first when I looked at the title; I thought yu meant like; 2 people broke up and one of them is trying to get the other one back. That's what confused me at first because of the way it started. But as I read on, i realized you were talking about revenge

[MiLKDUD_DOKiE]

ahaha yeah what she said ^ lols i thought it was like relationship kinda way<3* it was good

[pingpang_0811]

i thought it's a love story at first too
but it's so strong.

[*stephinika*]

yeah i thought the same as the rest when i saw the title, i quite like how its written though. it flows so well and the words you used helped convey your message nicely. good job!