RAP - NIGHTMARE4TAKI, dont laugh |
| *nightmare4taki* |
 Apr 23 2005, 11:11 PM
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This is a little poem I made. Dont know if its a rap or not but oh well. It sucks i know.
AS I sit back and spit punchlines that strike sharper than a knife// I really ask myself what am i trying to accomplish life// Im just trying to be stable and establish my name// As I witness the hate around the world will never change// Sometimes i question myself and ask why was i put hear// Especially when i have to live in constant fear// Every hustler is after more money ,paper ,or cheddar// It really makes me wonder will this place get any better// Racism has never died ppl need to know its still around us// Why cant we just all let positive energy surround us// Im not trying to be the next BIG or PAC// Im just saying things may seem good but its not// The gov cant feed the homeless but has money for bombs// This is why im thankful for my dad and my moms// This is just things i have to get off my chest// When i look at life i realize how im really blessed// I say to myself it could be a lot worst// Thats why i have to let this energy burst// Everyone wants to make a little bit of earnings// Ppl sell they soul and inside they know their burning// Check my assets and look what i have acquired// Nothing much but a little bit of knowledge to help me build an empire// No one wants to correspond to what I already done// Be a man and stand up while these other brothers run// B*tch n*ggas Rich n*ggas ,you know its all there// Racist ppl seem to look at me with a cold-hearted stare// See Im not your typical instrument to be played like a tool// Im not your typical n*gga to be made into a fool// I see no admiration for my abberration as I step outside of life's little portal// The fact to living is to die and realize were all mortal// What the f*ck do I spit for if you already heard it// See I do my flow different even though its reworded// |
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| *wind&fire* |
Apr 24 2005, 12:00 AM
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its good i like the topic...
why would people want cheddar? |
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Apr 24 2005, 12:01 AM
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 insanitys contagious.  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,210 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,707 |
Its ok what pissed me off is when people always inclue BIG or PAC in songs , its good to be remebered , but some just use it for fame.
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Apr 24 2005, 04:36 AM
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B-rex Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 128,689 |
^ true, very true
and what ppl fail to see is that pac and biggie are NOT the best, because they are highly overrated and praised. theres many better rappers now and in the past. but anyways good rap, good flow, simple vocab tho, 8/10 |
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| *nightmare4taki* |
Apr 24 2005, 08:13 PM
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Thx for the comments
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