It's Just A Dream |
 Apr 8 2004, 06:30 PM
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This is a short poem but I want to know your opinions.
It's Just A Dream I want to be close to you I never want to let you go I want to dream about you Wherever my mind flows I would want to think about you Every single step of the way I will always love you Even if my mind turns gray I have always wanted you No matter how hard it would seem But the worst part about it is It's just a dream |
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Apr 8 2004, 07:08 PM
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QUOTE I will always love you Even if my mind turns gray For a second, I read it as "gay." Haha. Nonetheless, it's a nice poem. 
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Apr 8 2004, 07:10 PM
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 durian Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 13,124 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,860 |
Aww that's so sweet =D Aww, u write poetry too? I used to.. then I lost the book that I wrote like my best poems in and after that.. I just couldn't write anymore...
Aww so sweet =) |
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Apr 8 2004, 11:01 PM
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 doot doot doot Group: Member Posts: 1,803 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,954 |
its really sweet.. and deep. but its so sad.. =( just a dream..
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Apr 8 2004, 11:08 PM
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Aww
 If that was based on some real dude. Lets beat him up!  That poem reminded me of christina's sn...damn dreams. - Chinkieeyedpnoi |
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Apr 9 2004, 12:14 AM
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 Retired Posting Whore Group: Member Posts: 699 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 2,911 |
I'll always love you...Even if I fling feces on your face... I think thats a beter line
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Apr 9 2004, 01:52 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,989 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,691 |
I don't usually write poems but I like this one girl right now so I just want to write poems to let it out or something like that.
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Apr 9 2004, 01:56 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,077 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,904 |
Wow it's really sweet.There should be more thoughtful guys like you.
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Apr 9 2004, 03:29 AM
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 Hi! I'm Dani :) Group: Member Posts: 5,637 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,369 |
nyce poem. its nyce
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Apr 9 2004, 05:59 AM
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 im a xanga whore...and how! Group: Member Posts: 139 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,028 |
nice poem =),
i hate dreams...well mines, when you wake up, you wanna go back, reality hits you and you feel even more lost. but that's just me 
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Apr 9 2004, 01:29 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,989 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,691 |
Yeah sometimes you wish those good dreams would come true.
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Apr 13 2004, 11:42 AM
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questions make me blue. Group: Member Posts: 2,608 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,796 |
though thoughts could be deceiving..
 (Winter Posted on Apr 9 2004, 1:56 AM) QUOTE There should be more thoughtful guys like you. why can`t guys show their "thoughtfullness"?? *sighs* a friend of mine has a xanga for every feeling he has..  haha.. |
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Apr 13 2004, 02:04 PM
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QUOTE(chinkieeyedpnoi @ Apr 8 2004, 11:08 PM) Aww If that was based on some real dude. Lets beat him up! That poem reminded me of christina's sn...damn dreams. - Chinkieeyedpnoi lol it reminded of me it too!  nice poem hun
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Apr 14 2004, 09:41 AM
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 Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
that's pretty damn good. i love poetry but none of that corny pointless shit. yours really had meaning behind it. i loved it.
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Apr 14 2004, 07:49 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,102 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,162 |
aw...is this based on a real thought/feeling/fantasy? I have thoughts like those sometimes; I'm not good enough for the guy I like.
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Apr 14 2004, 11:49 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
awww seems like it's from ur mind...right? hehe i mean.... yeahhhh i guess...lols but newais it's cute~~ hehe seems like u dun wana turn back nd' jus keep on going... ^^
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Apr 14 2004, 11:52 PM
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 All I want for Christmas is an Underground Band. Group: Member Posts: 1,046 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,797 |
man..ur poem is totally relating to me right now..good job.
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