Apology pt. II, I don't think its enough... |
 Apr 20 2005, 01:01 AM
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 Holla if ya hate me  Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819  |
They say good thigns come
To those who wait Well I've waited 15 years So now its too late My blood has been poisoned By the devils taste My mind has been drugged So my thoughts erased I speak in a point of view Most can imagine Words that you feel Not non-sense people blabbin Trying to be a good kid Got my ass in school Thats only step one Not ready for two At my age I feel so lost Its like im way up above But close to falling off I've let people down I held that in my heart The worlds a different place I could never be apart Life is as life does Living with hate and regret Another life awaits Cause I hear it calling me All I've got to give for this one Is my deepest apology I'm sorry for everything.... but its impossible for me to stop I know I said I wasn't planning on writing anymore, but after the first one I just got carried away and wrote "Pt. II" |
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Apr 20 2005, 01:04 AM
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 hello : ) Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
I like it. A lot. I like these lines best:
QUOTE At my age I feel so lost Its like im way up above But close to falling off I've let people down I held that in my heart The worlds a different place I could never be apart Life is as life does Living with hate and regret Good job once again! 
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Apr 20 2005, 01:05 AM
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 A.K.A. Simplicityxx Group: Member Posts: 1,878 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 56,813 |
that.. was..spectacular.
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