Its a little apology..., To everybody I ever let down... |
 Apr 19 2005, 02:29 PM
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 Holla if ya hate me  Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819  |
Have you ever sat back and looked through the past?
Wishing to change all the things you did last? Think about all the wrongs that you did? Think about all your days as a kid? Being trouble free never stressed a loft Growin up is hard, thats why I hang with the noft All these past years of darkness and violence Wishing one day to embark on your silence Loft is a trench you only dig yourself deeper Until you reach the bottom, where it gets steeper Never getting out until you finally understand I've lived as a kid now its time to grow up 15 years of age and I still haven't started Getting myself in those painful positions Wondering if anyone truly ever listened I'm sorry mom for not being your son I'm sorry boys for leaving your side I'm sorry dad I can't be special in your eyes I'm sorry girls that my loved never lasted I'm sorry for everything but I just can't stop... I'm sorry I know it sucks... i'm not really a writer or anything but its a new found way for me to let things go... 
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Apr 19 2005, 03:40 PM
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It's not me whos the problem... Group: Member Posts: 50 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 110,422 |
I like it, and I think what you're trying convey is sweet and comes out well, just keep writing and you'll get better.
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Apr 19 2005, 04:19 PM
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 Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
it's good. It shows that you are sorry, which is all that matters. I hope that whatever went wrong is being fixed.
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Apr 19 2005, 09:51 PM
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Holla if ya hate me Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819 |
QUOTE(wounded @ Apr 19 2005, 4:19 PM) it's good. It shows that you are sorry, which is all that matters. I hope that whatever went wrong is being fixed.  Yeah, so do I =\ QUOTE(trail_of_memories @ Apr 19 2005, 3:40 PM) I like it, and I think what you're trying convey is sweet and comes out well, just keep writing and you'll get better. I don't plan on writing anymore but I just feel its the only way to get things out =\ Yeah and thnx again 
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Apr 20 2005, 12:45 AM
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 hello : ) Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
It's really good. I like the beginning because I can relate to it. Good job =) Write more even though you said you weren't going to.
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Apr 21 2005, 01:04 AM
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i really like it. it flows well and the meaning you're conveying comes across nicely. well done.
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Apr 21 2005, 02:08 AM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
i like the part where u say sorry to ppl...it reminds me of the song perfect by simple plan...
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