YOUNG LOVE, ;love letter |
 Apr 16 2005, 09:29 PM
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 pull my finger..  Group: Member Posts: 71 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,414  |
a girl and a guy.. on a winter chill
only young love was what they could feel the breeze of each others scent.. melted each others heart when they caught each others eyes.. it was young love from the start started out friends.. as best friends should be saw more in each other then others could see never seen close together in public but close at home making each other vows to never let one another be alone as days grew on so did the feelings within hearts never torn apart but troubles were to begin her dad had a problem and the problem was he it was hard for them to see each other every other day however there love never faded away time goes on and things only get better patience is the key to everything in this love letter      
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Apr 16 2005, 10:40 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
Wow; that created a whole scene in my head. Great job =)
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Apr 16 2005, 10:56 PM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
wow..that was good..i can imagine it happening..
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Apr 21 2005, 11:41 AM
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 .bubblicious inspirations. @ www.bubbliciousoul.com Group: Member Posts: 466 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 112,228 |
nice... i really like it.
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Apr 21 2005, 12:15 PM
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 weird Sarah. yes,me... Group: Member Posts: 714 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,023 |
nice job~
i can imagine the view easily in my mind |
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Apr 22 2005, 01:01 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
awwwww...lol you did a great job :) Very sweet poem. The parts i liked the best were:
QUOTE(ChaOzXx @ Apr 16 2005, 9:29 PM) the breeze of each others scent.. melted each others heart when they caught each others eyes.. it was young love from the start however their love never faded away time goes on and things only get better patience is the key to everything in this love letter  amazing job! |
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Apr 22 2005, 06:28 PM
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 live life to the fullest <3 Group: Member Posts: 97 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 101,474 |
wow.
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Apr 22 2005, 07:17 PM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
Wow. I loved it. Beautiful job
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Apr 22 2005, 08:41 PM
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That is truly adorable.
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Apr 25 2005, 12:26 AM
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 boo Group: Member Posts: 5,512 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,765 |
Really sweet, I'm speechless.
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Apr 26 2005, 05:49 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,220 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 81,808 |
awwwwwww!!!! *tear* thats so cute/sweet --everything!!! lol
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