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Sirens, poetry by me.
*mishyerr*
post Apr 13 2005, 04:30 PM
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The sirens of my blood-filled sea,
Call seductively and frequently for me.
Their voices sing of a voluptuous, sweet killing,
But to follow this path, I must be willing.
I’d close my eyes, let the glass slide through,
Heaven on earth would suddenly be true.
Now my worries and fears have dissipated,
And I have paid so my mind will be belated.
I apologize that I do not fill your time,
Full of sweet sex and physical rhyme.
For I thought that you cared about my heart,
But loss of touch has set you far apart.
Well, I won’t waste my precious affection,
For I have lost it before in a fatal attraction.
I cannot control anymore, the door is shut,
They thought that my young mind was too corrupt.
Now I walk still with my head up straight,
I can smile and appear in a dazed blithe state.
But a soon as humanity has lost sight of ‘the her,’
Misery laces out my tears, becomes my lover.
How many times has my heart been broken,
I gave you my soul, with my heart wide open.
The philosophy I once strongly believed,
Made me so my heart would not be diseased.
Once again, I look at love with indifference,
Delighting in others failures and dissonance.



Written in a ranting and despondent mood.

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*islandgirl4eva*
post Apr 13 2005, 07:42 PM
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Michelle...oh hun, this is so painfully beautiful. The analogies you used were wonderful and vivid. I love you Michelle!
 
agirlnamed_aly
post Apr 14 2005, 10:10 PM
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Wow that was a really great poem. I think what made it the most engaging was the choice of words and voice put into the writing. Lovely stuff!

Mucho love,

Alyson
 
*mzkandi*
post Apr 15 2005, 04:57 AM
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wow that was great. i need to get back into writing poetry
 

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