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 Apr 13 2005, 10:48 AM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
i might add more later.
LOVE TO HATE EACHOTHER I’m standing at the end Of the gasoline-soaked bridge to you Lit match in hand Contemplating what to do If I blow it out It means I’ll be running back If I drop it It means I’ll have to swim Your hand in my left A machete in my right I want to cut you off I want to hold you tight I wear a smile as I swing The blade at your wrist I’m in a panic In a frantic search for my sewing kit At a candle-lit dinner I smile, you wink You make me feel at home And you poison my drink You lift your glass Propose a toast I take a sip Then you stick your finger down my throat It’s evident Nothing between us is ever over Ever We love to hate each other. |
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Apr 13 2005, 05:29 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
I like it. A few parts I didnt really understand. But I love the last stanza.
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Apr 13 2005, 05:32 PM
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 dripping destruction Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929 |
loved it.
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Apr 13 2005, 05:33 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Ooooooh, I love it.
QUOTE I’m standing at the end Of the gasoline-soaked bridge to you Lit match in hand Contemplating what to do If I blow it out It means I’ll be running back If I drop it It means I’ll have to swim ^ My favorite part. What an excellent beginning. Wonderful job, I love it.  Very well done.
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Apr 13 2005, 10:54 PM
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i love it. very well written...great meaning in the words too.
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