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 Apr 7 2005, 01:12 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
i'm so sick of people who are so ashamed of whatever flaws they were born with or whatever they think nobody else likes. all so the guys will want to screw em and leave em.
She’s got the look. She’s got the attitude Because she vomits up all her food She’s got the curves, she’s got the body She got it with her daddy’s money Her hair is blonde, she has double Ds She spends most of her time on her knees She is every thing you want But at what cost? Exchanging honesty For acceptance in a bullshit culture Exchanging her identity For what everyone wants her to be She doesn’t care for passing her class She feels accomplished when they say they want to tap that ass She’s scared to risk her social status She wears her make-up: her artificial apparatus She killed herself a while ago Weapon of choice: cosmopolitan No one can embrace their flaws No one can be happy with themselves Humans aren’t the dominant species anymore We’ve been overrun by harlots and whores No honor, no morals A generation following their lower heads |
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Apr 7 2005, 04:09 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
So great, and so true. It describes a lot of the people at my school -_-.
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| *Kathleen* |
Apr 7 2005, 04:33 PM
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^ I have to agree...applies to too many of them.
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| *Azarel* |
Apr 7 2005, 07:14 PM
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Very strong, I like the diction.
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Apr 7 2005, 08:25 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
QUOTE(Sa-Chan @ Apr 7 2005, 5:09 PM) So great, and so true. It describes a lot of the people at my school -_-.  Same here. Anyway.. Great job. I really like this one. QUOTE She killed herself a while ago Weapon of choice: cosmopolitan No one can embrace their flaws No one can be happy with themselves Humans aren’t the dominant species anymore We’ve been overrun by harlots and whores No honor, no morals A generation following their lower heads ^ I love that part. Wonderful job. |
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| *stephinika* |
Apr 8 2005, 11:46 AM
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wonderfully written...so true too, but sad.
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| *islandgirl4eva* |
Apr 8 2005, 12:17 PM
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that was amazing. You described the epitome of pop culture's effect on society. I admire you for that. I loved it.
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Apr 8 2005, 03:39 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
You say exactly what you mean... And people can relate, because the things you write have to do with us. IT HAS A PURPOSE, other than to express anxiety. If I could tune my television to your thoughts, what else would I learn?
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Apr 9 2005, 11:29 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
some riiiiiiill crazy stuff. thanks! ^^
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| *wind&fire* |
Apr 10 2005, 12:36 AM
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dammmit how you always see the truth?
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Apr 13 2005, 05:57 PM
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 ticktock. Group: Member Posts: 1,138 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,235 |
Sad but True.
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