Temptations of the Flesh, Song by me... |
 Apr 4 2005, 04:21 PM
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The feel of steel, slicing through your flesh,
Is intriguing to many kinds. The feel of blood dripping off your body, Runs rampid through your mind. As time goes by, the razor dulls, The cuts begin to fade. Nobody questions, nobody wonders, They all know how they're made. (Chorus) The razor slipping through the skin, Always makes for the sweatest of sin. Blood flowing in streams, dripping to the floor, Now open the floodgates, I WANT MORE! The cuts on your arms, scratches on your legs, You don't even know your place. You never know what you're gonna' do, You've started your fall from Grace. (Chorus x2) Comments would be great. Thanks ya'll. |
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Apr 4 2005, 07:26 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Pretty good, pretty good.
I like it. |
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Apr 4 2005, 08:29 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
that's good.
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Apr 5 2005, 06:41 PM
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very descriptive and well put together. nice job.
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Apr 6 2005, 12:58 PM
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Newbie Group: Member Posts: 6 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 122,331 |
Thanks guys. I'm glad ya'll like it. I'll be posting more of my stuff soon. Rock on.
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Apr 6 2005, 06:53 PM
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 Do you miss your little girl? Group: Member Posts: 181 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,851 |
I like this. Although I despise cutting (why don't some scars fade?), this capture the... yeah, perfectly. :) Keep the good job up. :)
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