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 Mar 30 2005, 12:22 AM
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Um...bored...I give you three Micro Poems...just to let you all know I'm still alive. I have a part two coming for "Regret"
You What am I to do? ....I'm falling backwards Over and under just for you S/M Cold cold steel bound and gagged is this real? Edges biting So exciting.... Juliet Drove up at sunset Looking hot in her red corvette Damn... Stick me with a bayonet but please don't light that cigarette TxT Copyright©2005 BeyezB |
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Mar 30 2005, 07:12 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
i love the first two
Juliet just comes of as a trying to hard to rhyme, sorry |
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Mar 30 2005, 08:16 PM
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aww..well thats the point hun...I rhymes too much...it's supposed to sound funny...ish glad u like the top two
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Apr 3 2005, 07:28 PM
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I love the first one
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