Never have I fallen |
 Mar 29 2005, 04:39 PM
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 I can't believe its not "Ryan"  Group: Member Posts: 1,981 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,368  |
Never Have I Fallen
Your lips speak soft sweetness Your Touch a cool caress I am lost in your magic My hear beats within your chest I think of you each morning And, dream of you each night I think of your arms around me And, I cannot express my delight Never have I fallen But, I am quickly on my way You hold my heart in your hands And, I pray you never give it away -Ryan C. Narciso- |
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Mar 29 2005, 04:42 PM
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 Holla if ya hate me Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819 |
 beautiful (no that didnt really make me cry but it was nice)I feel for you man, keep that feeling there for as long as you can. |
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Mar 29 2005, 05:52 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
that's amazing! beautiful
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Mar 31 2005, 08:16 AM
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I can't believe its not "Ryan" Group: Member Posts: 1,981 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,368 |
Thanks Guys!
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Mar 31 2005, 02:18 PM
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 =] Group: Member Posts: 712 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,626 |
I really like it. Nicely written.
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Mar 31 2005, 07:28 PM
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thats so sweet, and very nicely written. lovely.
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Apr 2 2005, 09:46 PM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
aw that was really sweet :) Great job!
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