the next room, another poem |
 Mar 29 2005, 07:53 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
four walls
for granted closing in the good sense you prize tells me to run the laughters in the next room i'll had in there and chat with the grown ups its easier to smile than cry and say why i've lied punished for two year's good behaviour cuase its wortheless a dollar a minute or fifty cents a dime you cant run from you problems but im really fast see? i won a medal on the wall 'Best Actor' f**k adam sandler, i'll play the fool for sleepwalking forget willy, he's got nothing on me try alittle harder and smile a little longer melodrama? or psychoanalysis of a grapefruit vegetative, and tuned out staring and serving you a beer while you laugh with them and show my report yes im proud but excuse me while i step into the next room and have anervous breakdown dont worry. i'll leave a portrait with a ceramic grin no one will know im a real good artist |
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Mar 29 2005, 09:35 PM
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 crushed. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,432 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,026 |
I really like the part where you mention running from your problems, and the last few lines:
QUOTE i'll leave a portrait with a ceramic grin no one will know im a real good artist good job. |
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Mar 30 2005, 01:04 AM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
i really liked it..i like the part where u said its easier to laugh rather to cry..b/c its true...and i can kinda relate to that..
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