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 Mar 24 2005, 01:43 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
sounds like "this photograph is proof" by TbS.
I’M SCARED We’ve had this talk so many times I know it off by heart But no matter how many times we live through it It still tares me apart You branded in my skin the digits Of every tragic date You and I have an endless cycle A perpetual stalemate I want it to end But I need to hold you I’M SCARED I’m scared to let this happen again. Again. Again. I’M SCARED I’m scared to let you in again To feed what bites my hand You’re the teacher of the lesions I refuse to learn Do I dare relight the fire that has Scarred me with these burns? To spark this conflagration That destroys all I’ve brought up? Traumatized by passion Scared to ever love again! I need it to end But I want to hold you I’M SCARED! I’m scared to let this happen again Again. Again. I’M SCARED! I’m scared to let you in again To feed what bit my hand |
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Mar 24 2005, 07:53 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
QUOTE To spark this conflagration I love the word "conflagration." Anyway. Whoa. Very, very good. I can't believe that people haven't commented on this yet. I love it. Great job as always! I like reading what you write. |
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Mar 25 2005, 12:33 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Mar 24 2005, 1:43 PM) I’M SCARED We’ve had this talk so many times I know it off by heart But no matter how many times we live through it It still tares me apart You branded in my skin the digits Of every tragic date You and I have an endless cycle A perpetual stalemate I want it to end But I need to hold you  ^i especially like that part...but whoa!  i loved it, i could relate to it...seriously one of the best poems i read on here before. Awesome awesome job! props and more props to you
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Mar 28 2005, 08:12 PM
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Is it a coincidence that your poems get better as you post more and more?
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