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Story for Createblog Writers, not a forum game, much more serious!
RiddleMeWonders
post Mar 22 2005, 04:13 PM
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fell in love with a boy
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OKAY. So maybe it is formated the same way that the add on silly games are, the stick stories told around camp fires, but this is much more in depth. MOVE THIS IF YOU NEED TO. Sorry, I'm just eh.

I would like everyone to add on. It doesn't have to be a mere few sentences, you can inhabit any character you like, one you made, or one already in the story. It doesn't matter just as long as the story is kept going.

I know this adds a big crazy icon to be associated with me from now on, but really I don't care just as long as one person gets it, Okay?

Have fun, write well. Love,
Lindsey
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From the Duchess Ambellina of Halion

Ahti



In the days when I was too self absorbed to know who you were, I carved you up in little pieces and fed you with a silver spoon to her, the bitch queen thought to change the town forever. Thinking it was the best thing, I told you to tell them goodbye before I sentenced you die, away from the light of the city in chaos, and return to the hell that they rescued you from out of pity. In your helpless state, you begged me promise not to hate you, and I did. I also lied. But I can tell you that I tried not to. I couldn’t imagine that my own self preservation depended on the fate of one who glared like a child plucked from his mother’s bosom at me… And now I’ve come to bid your return, and ask for your help. The city needs you to dethrone Her Majesty, formerly Princess Evelia, the undoing of the very last part of liberty known to exist. Will you forgive and help us in our time of need, even though- with much regret- I must say we didn’t help you in your time of need?

Please send a reply back to me with Etalon.

A mistaken child in youth,
Ambellina
 
 
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KissMe2408
post Mar 25 2005, 12:24 AM
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Yawn
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Ambellina-
How many moons have passed since our last encounter? How many tears have I shed thinking about those Promises undone? You were so cruel to me, yet i loved you with everything I held dear. There were times when i would of given anything to hear an apology run from your lips. Instead of compassion, you tortured me with anguish. The last words from your mouth used to haunt my dreams every night. You promised you wouldn't hate me, but promises are often left empty and dry. Now that you have asked for my return, it is strange to think how much we have both changed. My tears have run dry and crystalized into my neck, my heart has grown cold and remains untouched. The day that Ambellina has asked for my return, is surely a day that should stand out in my memory. And yet for some reason your image has died. Why should i return? The throne is no concern to me. Where were you in my time of need? The blood red sky of October still shines brightly in your eyes. Your last Promises to me still echo in my ears, not in love, but in hate. Your words were cold to me then, and they are still cold to me now. When you have learned the true meaning of suffering then that is the day that I will return to your side. - Ahti

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lol okay lindsey there you go, that is what first came to mind. I hope that is what you were looking for. lol tried my best to continue the story, hope you like happy.gif
 

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