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 Mar 19 2005, 01:51 AM
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Is it possible to fall victim to the cliches of hopeless romanticism?
It must be, because I'm a victim and I'm getting killed softly. All I want, depsite my ailing domestic woes, is that feeling, That feeling that humbles the loudest boast to shy whispers. I find it intriguing how I can sit and listen to a song about lost love and realize how much I have taken for granted in past relationships. However, going against my nature, I didn't blame myself for it and, yet, I refuse to push this issue further. My decision has been made, no relationship, no quest to rekindle the flame, just an attempt to shake these thoughts and move on. Besides, I could already be in love with a stranger... |
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Mar 19 2005, 01:54 AM
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 crushed. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,432 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,026 |
wow, that last line really got me. I love your writing.
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Mar 19 2005, 01:57 AM
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You write so well =] I like the last line but also
QUOTE All I want, depsite my ailing domestic woes, is that feeling, That feeling that humbles the loudest boast to shy whispers. It's all great though. |
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Mar 19 2005, 02:16 AM
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QUOTE(bballbabiegrl @ Mar 19 2005, 12:54 AM) wow, that last line really got me. I love your writing.  Thanks a lot. BTW, I was trying to look at your Xanga but the colors throw me off. So I'm going to just subscribe and catch it in an email. These poems are all in my xanga because my xanga is my poetry journal. |
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Mar 19 2005, 02:17 AM
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QUOTE(M1SSxCHR1SSY @ Mar 19 2005, 12:57 AM) You write so well =] I like the last line but also It's all great though. Every thread I've posted in, you have too and your intelligence and politcally awareness really impresses me. I wish there were more beautiful and politically conscious women in this world. Maybe then, I wouldn't be single. |
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Mar 19 2005, 09:49 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
Thank you...for this. It was beautiful. My boyfriend just broke up with me, and it hurts because he keeps saying, "It's not forever". So I keep trying to fix things, but in a way...I think I realized with this I just need to move on, because I can't wait my whole life. And maybe I could love someone else...and not even know it yet.
This was beautiful. It was short, but far from simple. It was just..lovely. |
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Mar 19 2005, 10:36 PM
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I'm glad that my poetry could benefit someone else other than me. Up until recently, I've been apprehensive about sharing my poetry with others, but if it can result in brightening up someone's day, then share I'll do. I'm glad I could help you and keep your head up.
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Mar 20 2005, 01:02 AM
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hello : ) Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
QUOTE(BrandonSaunders @ Mar 19 2005, 12:17 AM) Every thread I've posted in, you have too and your intelligence and politcally awareness really impresses me. I wish there were more beautiful and politically conscious women in this world. Maybe then, I wouldn't be single. Awww thank you =] And in order for this post to not count as spam, I'll once again say great writing. And I think I'll subscribe to your xanga so I can read your future poetry. |
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Feb 13 2006, 02:02 AM
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^_^ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,141 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,466 |
Wait, wait...
I've met my stranger. |
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Feb 13 2006, 03:51 AM
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QUOTE(M1SSxCHR1SSY @ Mar 20 2005, 5:02 PM) Awww thank you =] And in order for this post to not count as spam, I'll once again say great writing. And I think I'll subscribe to your xanga so I can read your future poetry. thats a good idea... i love the style... brandon whats your xanga? all you put is your LJ on your profile |
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Feb 13 2006, 04:16 AM
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^_^ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,141 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 91,466 |
Xanga.com/BrandonSaunders
buuuut, all the entries are private. I need to start posting more often, anyway. |
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Feb 13 2006, 04:30 AM
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah... rejected T_T
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Feb 13 2006, 08:06 PM
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 Feeel X Group: Member Posts: 2,814 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,498 |
wow. please make them public! your writing is so good, i'm learning. it makes my writing trash =[
going to subscribe you now! please write more! |
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