Dying Inside, how I feel everyday Options

[azn hunni xox]

Dying Inside

I scream as I hold my head and close my eyes,
Yet everything is quiet, and a look of happiness sweeps my face,
Tears start to pour out onto my gray cheeks,
I feel myself slipping away,
But I still stand here with this fake emotion,
And I can't shake it off, it's glued on, like a mask,
I try and kick to let this demon go,
But I cannot let go...
And I'm dying inside.


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Okay, my first shot at an unrhyming poem... Kinda like a lot of other poems out there.

[ItzOnlySydney]

i feel that way too sometimes. *hugs azn hunnie* i know what your going through

[azn hunni xox]

  i feel that way too sometimes. *hugs azn hunnie* i know what your going through

*hugs back* Yeah --; Where every day you have to pretend... and... thanks. It'll get better sooner or later though.

[Teesa]

aw, feel better..

[CRAZEDindian40]

I like it, I think we all feel like that sometimes.

[xTINAA]

I can relate to your poem. Although it might be similar to others out there, I quite like it. =]

[fameONE]

You never know what someone is going through and poetry like this is more than a means of ventilation, it's a cry for help and a shot at therapy. At least, that what it is for me.

Good job.

[azn hunni xox]

Thanks, glad you guys like it

[yukichan]

good job...hope u feel better...

[*salcha*]

its aiite, i can relate :/