The Whisper |
 Mar 16 2005, 09:16 PM
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I remember a time
In the subtle dark When the breeze rattles the chyme And dogs release their bark A whisper came to me Letting a secret in my ear It said "They won't let you be" After a pause, "You have much to fear." After that, I could find no sleep Unrest left me in dismay Many children can only weep When the whisper comes to stay A cry at every bump Desperation at every creak Was it your sister falling on a nasty clump Or a monsterous, one-eyed freak What is the whisper and why am I its host? Remember through your tears The whisper is no man, nor ghost It is everyone's childhood fears Robbie Hastings (That's me =P) 3/16/05 |
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Mar 16 2005, 09:36 PM
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 uh..hi Group: Member Posts: 21 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 31,881 |
QUOTE(hrobert16 @ Mar 16 2005, 9:16 PM) Was it your sister falling on a nasty clump Or a monsterous, one-eyed freak  This is a good poem.  However, I don't understand where this part came from.Good job. 
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Mar 17 2005, 01:01 AM
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 crushed. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,432 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,026 |
I love it, seems to calming, except for that part^
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