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 Mar 7 2005, 04:36 AM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
darn girls making me emo. darn TbS bein so catchy. hehe.
I WONDER WHY You sure do draw a lot of hearts now-a-days It’s funny, considering you don’t know shit about love How could my exit have warmed your soul? Maybe you can pull off fooling yourself, but I’m not buyin’ it I wonder why you never told yourself you were happy while I was around I wonder why. I wonder why. I wonder what happened to trigger your self revolution, as you might call it I wonder why. I wonder why. It says here that he makes you happy It’s funny; you’ve said the exact opposite last July And you’ve never said anything like that about me, as I did my backbends Just trying to get you to crack a smile, now I’m standing up and pulling your lips down I wonder why you never lifted a finger to make me feel wanted at all I wonder why. I wonder why. The most important choices weren’t in the favor of our prosperity I wonder why. I wonder why… I swore on twenty stories of bibles before I ever talked to you Because I know you hate liars Well here’s the bloody, brutal truth I loved you more than I can remember loving anything I didn’t think it would end like this Hell, I didn’t think it would end But, right about now, I’m pretty glad it did Keep telling yourself you don’t miss me Keep thinking you didn’t just kick yourself You might just convince yourself Maybe I should hate you for this (haha) The final irony in this story, I guess Is that the sweetest lips I’ve ever had the pleasure of tasting Were connected to something so bitter I wonder where all your quote un-quote friends went I wonder why. I wonder why. I wonder why this is still on my mind. I wonder why you still burgle my reveries I wonder why. I wonder why. I don’t know why. I doubt you do, either. |
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Mar 7 2005, 03:49 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
D****, boy..
You pulled me in.   Great job. |
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| *stephinika* |
Mar 7 2005, 08:35 PM
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^^
agreed...that was amazing. i loved it.
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Mar 8 2005, 02:24 AM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
QUOTE I swore on twenty stories of bibles before I ever talked to you Because I know you hate liars Well here’s the bloody, brutal truth I loved you more than I can remember loving anything I didn’t think it would end like this Hell, I didn’t think it would end But, right about now, I’m pretty glad it did Keep telling yourself you don’t miss me Keep thinking you didn’t just kick yourself You might just convince yourself Maybe I should hate you for this (haha) The final irony in this story, I guess Is that the sweetest lips I’ve ever had the pleasure of tasting Were connected to something so bitter I loved that whole part. ^ Excellent job as always. I feel it. :) |
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| *Kathleen* |
Mar 9 2005, 06:41 PM
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This is one of my favorites of yours.
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Mar 10 2005, 09:24 PM
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you amaze me.
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