The Perfect Girl..., A poem to my one and only |
 Feb 28 2005, 10:58 PM
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 Why is life such a burden?  Group: Member Posts: 74 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 107,737  |
Yay poetry I luv poetry anyway here is my poem.
THE PERFECT GIRL When I see you, you make my day. When I talk to you, you cheer me up in every way. When we hold hands, you make me love you even more. When you hug me, you make my love for you soar. When you kiss me, you fill my heart with joy. For all these reasons, I am luckiest to be your boy. |
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Feb 28 2005, 11:25 PM
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 x___aka K0K0 Group: Member Posts: 466 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 89,266 |
Aw that's sweet!
Wish someone would write something like that to me lol |
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Feb 28 2005, 11:46 PM
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 Live Your Own Party Group: Member Posts: 1,261 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,489 |
Awww... I think that's so sweet. Most guys aren't man enough to write poetry. I think only the real men are those who show emotion and aren't afraid to express themselves. Great job!
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Mar 1 2005, 12:24 AM
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Why is life such a burden? Group: Member Posts: 74 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 107,737 |
Ty all! Ya I like writing poetry...some of the guys at my school think its stupid but naw poetry aint stupid...
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Mar 2 2005, 03:12 PM
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cute. a bit cliche, but it is sweet.
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Mar 3 2005, 02:03 AM
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Why is life such a burden? Group: Member Posts: 74 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 107,737 |
TY steph....
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