wow.. long time no write.. Options

[lovescream]

Wow.. really, I havent written a poem in a LONG time.
Haha, and no, I didnt start writing one.
Well, yeah, I did. =\ I think it sucks though.
Hm, I dug out my old poem book and found poems I've written when I was 10 and now(11). o.o it probably really stinks.. but uh.. here goes.

Suicide
The sharp edges
With the screaming sound,
It goes away,
then comes around,
I see more people go,
Than I see people die,
But they make their own choices,
to fall or to fly.
It's their own world,
it's their own life,
whatever they decide to do,
was their own sacrifice. [sp?]


yeah.. heh. I'm going to continue writing the poem since 2004. <3 first poem of 2005. ^^

edit:

[Wishful_Dream]

yup you spelled everything correctly, i think.. or maybe i didn't read it clear enough.. anyways, i love it. =x

wow. you wrote that when you were 10-11? it's really terrific =x

[racoons > you]

wow thats really, good, but i dont think u spelled sacrafice right... or maybe i m wrong?

[*stephinika*]

wow, nicely done especially for a 10/11 year old. and yeah you spelled sacrifice right.