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what did i tell you?
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post Feb 11 2005, 01:19 AM
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early AFI style sXe hardcore.


WHAT DID I TELL YOU?
Do you feel big now?
You feel important?
You feel like you finally fit in
After you tell me how much you want to stand out
You say that it’s “fun”
And don’t care about the consequences
Well they’re here on your head now
And you’re dread has been brought to life

What did I f**king tell you?
It’s the wrong decision
What did I f**king tell you?
Don’t come crying to me when you realize
You did this to yourself

You tell me to accept it
But you haven’t given reason for it
I’ve given you reasons not to
So has yourself
I try to keep you out of
Tragic statistics
You use your age as a license to
Be a f**king idiot!

What did I f**king tell you?
It’s the wrong decision
What did I f**king tell you?
Don’t come crying to me when you realize
You did this to your f**king self

I think I know what I’m talking about when I say
Don’t do it
I think I know a thing or two about
Waste in the making
Don’t act like I don’t have a clue
I’ve been around much longer than you
Prove the movies wrong
Prove authority wrong
Prove the stereotype wrong
Don’t be so f**king
DUMB!

What did I f**king tell you?
It’s the wrong decision
What did I f**king tell you?
Don’t come crying to me when you realize
You f**ked up beyond repair
What did I f**king tell you?
There is no reason. No f**king reason.
What did I tell you?
Don’t come crying to me when you realize
You did this to your f**king self!!....
 
 
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RiddleMeWonders
post Feb 11 2005, 10:39 AM
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You've got alot of passion...
And I've got a feeling you don't make up situations to write about like some people I know.
You're a cool dude.
 
racoons > you
post Feb 11 2005, 07:02 PM
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ooo i like it... i wanna here it put to music
 
inthemudhole
post Feb 11 2005, 07:17 PM
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I love it. =)
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You've got alot of passion...
And I've got a feeling you don't make up situations to write about like some people I know.
You're a cool dude.

Agreed.
You're awesome, Lunchbox.
Great job on this one. I love it.
 
sweetdreamsx3
post Feb 12 2005, 02:15 AM
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QUOTE
What did I f**king tell you?
It’s the wrong decision
What did I f**king tell you?
Don’t come crying to me when you realize
You did this to your f**king self


I like this part. I can easily relate.
 
*Kathleen*
post Feb 12 2005, 03:49 PM
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QUOTE
I try to keep you out of
Tragic statistics

QUOTE
Prove the movies wrong
Prove authority wrong
Prove the stereotype wrong
Don’t be so f**king

^ Those are my favorite parts. Too bad this relates too much to me as well...although I think I've finally moved on with him. I really hope she gets better. sad.gif
 
smthngcrprategrl...
post Feb 12 2005, 04:32 PM
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brilliant
 
exbhai
post Feb 12 2005, 05:06 PM
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Thats a really nice poem, keep up the good work =)
 
Wishful_Dream
post Feb 13 2005, 09:28 AM
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wheee go make a song out of it! it sounds like song lyricss =x but its ten times better! no wait. ONE HUNDRED times.. and yeah.. my life kinda relates to it as well.. cry.gif
 

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