Hollow, an older poem I've found... |
 Feb 10 2005, 05:19 PM
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 fell in love with a boy  Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965  |
"Hollow"
I've been so hollow I've been so hollow I've been so, I've been so hollow inside I've forgotten my name I've forgotten to blame The people who wanted me to hide Will I listen to myself? Or will I listen to you? You say it's a hazard to my health But I really wonder if that's true. I'm sorry that I never wanted to know you And Now that I'm older I'll show you I know everything you wanted me to find out No more crying because nothings going to make me doubt. |
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Feb 10 2005, 08:21 PM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
wow, i love it
 You always put so much depth and emotion into your writing.
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Feb 10 2005, 08:47 PM
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i like it. the meaning behind your words is great. good job.
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