Cupid's Tainted Arrows, ..hear the cries |
 Feb 7 2005, 06:34 PM
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Thought I write something to cure my boredom...(just bending the story a little)
The day is fast approaching, The Year has already begun. Cupid has shot his arrows, This we know cannot be undone. Flapping his little angel wings, Bow and Arrows ready in hand, He seeks out his victims, Striking them down where they stand. Screams and cries, As Cupids arrows pass on by. Piercing each victims minds and heart, Cascading from the dark blue sky. As heartache bodies clustered along the streets, Crowed and bunch within the schools, Cupid would only smile and laugh, Because he intentional missed a few. But before that day, every year, The regretful maiden Psyche would appear. With her evil schemes, Holding her poisonous cream, She would taint Cupid's arrows While he lies in his dreams. As the poison leaked through, Scorching the vessels from within, Releasing everything that has been subdued Every desire and every sin. As havoc begins to emerge, While Cupids rest on the verge, for the following year. All that has been spilled, Is pain and blood drawn tears. 
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Feb 7 2005, 07:37 PM
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 I have no life Group: Member Posts: 1,119 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,675 |
Woah, thats awesome...I couldn't rhyme if my lilfe depended on it
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Feb 7 2005, 08:49 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 36 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 58,863 |
Oops made a mistake intentional = intentionally (I can't spell)
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Feb 12 2005, 01:27 PM
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I am Sandy. Hear me roar. Group: Member Posts: 1,152 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,896 |
Oh wow, that's beautiful. Me likey
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Feb 12 2005, 01:30 PM
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That's really cute..until the end. That was a change.
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Feb 12 2005, 09:13 PM
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wow...i love it. the whole idea is fantastic.
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Feb 13 2005, 01:28 AM
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Woah. That is so awesome.
Valentine's Day does suck. |
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Feb 13 2005, 01:29 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,541 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 44,332 |
Woah. That is so awesome.
Valentine's Day does suck. |
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Feb 13 2005, 04:24 AM
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 No Nose =[ Group: Member Posts: 101 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 87,291 |
Well written. I really like it. =]
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Feb 13 2005, 04:34 AM
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^agreed.
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Feb 13 2005, 10:22 PM
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 insanitys contagious. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,210 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 99,707 |
wow , so beautifull.
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