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Rowen vs. The Face
RiddleMeWonders
post Jan 20 2005, 10:10 PM
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fell in love with a boy
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You see how the words cut me down?
They dress me in wrags and then hand me a crown.

There is something about you that warns me
when I get close
so I don't mind just watching and waiting
Like a forgotten ghost

Sometimes in the mirror I'd see her
And I'd close my eyes ignoring
Every wink I saw
Will I continue to avoid
the conscience waiting with me
to be recognized and set free?
What happened to seperate us?
What caused the silence to bait us?
To change us?
 
 
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*stephinika*
post Jan 21 2005, 09:53 AM
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interesting. i like it. almost sounds like the type of thing i would write. good work i must say. thumbsup.gif
 
KissMe2408
post Jan 21 2005, 04:23 PM
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Yawn
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Awesome happy.gif you should know by now that i love ur work, haha. biggrin.gif Great Job, keep it up! and keep posting ur stuff cool.gif
 

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