rotten luck |
 Jan 10 2005, 01:27 AM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
this is the forst actual song me and my band have completed. enjoy
ROTTEN LUCK Another day, another struggle Another jigsaw puzzle With infinite pieces Strength decreases Enjoyment ceases to exist Another tightened fist Another threatened wrist And one more day to Grieve over the girl I miss Obsessing over our last kiss So I live another day being disrespected Another day to feel rejected So I ask how the f**k Did I get such rotten luck? Another day to feel pushed aside Another battle with suicide Let me ask you what the f**k? What rotten luck I’ve seen a lot of different faces Been to quite a lot of places But that’s all they are is Hunks of meat at punk rock shows No one cares. No one knows about me I’ve never felt so empty Another journal entry Where I bitch and moan about How nobody gives a damn and How pa-f**king-thetic I am So I live another day being disrespected Another day to feel rejected So I ask how the f**k Did I get such rotten luck? Another day to feel pushed aside Another battle with suicide Let me ask you what the f**k? What rotten luck Well I have friends to pick me up and Help me out when times get tough and See my through my tribulations Help me work out my frustrations Together we smash our enemies and Show each other empathy and Pull us through our hardest plights And stand, unite, for what is right Live a whole new day with self respect and Converse with friends with intellect and Realize life doesn’t suck Despite this rotten luck Be glad that I was ever born And grab existence by the horns Cause, in the end, I don’t give a f**k About this rotten luck |
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| *stephinika* |
Jan 10 2005, 02:10 AM
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very nice. i quite like it. very meaningful.
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| *wind&fire* |
Jan 10 2005, 04:04 AM
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can you write a score for this?
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| *Kathleen* |
Jan 10 2005, 07:08 PM
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I suppose it's a good uncanny thing that you're writing often.
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Jan 10 2005, 09:06 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Ahh! I love it!
QUOTE Another day, another struggle Another jigsaw puzzle With infinite pieces Strength decreases Enjoyment ceases to exist Another tightened fist Another threatened wrist And one more day to Grieve over the girl I miss Obsessing over our last kiss ^ I especially love that part. |
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Jan 11 2005, 03:06 PM
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 love sucks...big time jessir.. Group: Member Posts: 661 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,644 |
love it , love it , love it , LOVE IT! ..perfect.
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| *salcha* |
Jan 11 2005, 10:34 PM
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too bad its depressing hehe, but a good poem nonetheless.
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