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 Jan 9 2005, 01:23 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time  Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705  |
I'm gone and I'm faded
My minds completely jaded And I suffer like this for you I'm broken and tired Completely uninspired And I suffer like this for you So make me and break me With the love we never shared I never saw it comin Is it just too hard to care You can mold me and schol me With the lies so hard to keep And this cut's become so numb This pits become too deep So I'm useless and restless I'm absolutely senseless And I suffer like this for you My hearts filled with false hopes I guess I'll just learn to cope But I suffer like this for you So make me and break me With the love we never shared I never saw it coming Is it just too hard to care You can mold me and scold me With the lies so hard to keep And this cuts become so numb This pits become too deep I guess I'll just find my own way through life It's gunna be so hard without you by my side I know what to do; I guess I'll make it through And now the words so hard to say without you You can mold me...and schold me.. With the lies so hard to keep This cuts become so numb This pit is just too......deep. |
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Jan 9 2005, 01:43 PM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
noice!
i like how simple it is. i didn't have to consault my dictionary once! 
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Jan 9 2005, 01:53 PM
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Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Jan 9 2005, 1:43 PM) noice! i like how simple it is. i didn't have to consault my dictionary once!  Why thank you. I was having what you say, "writer's block" and I couldn't think of any big words. 
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Jan 10 2005, 02:12 AM
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i like it. the words are put together well.
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Jan 17 2005, 01:21 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 42 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,705 |
iNSPiRATiON.>.
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Jan 17 2005, 03:43 AM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
very niice!! great job! i love it
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Jan 17 2005, 10:59 AM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
that's really good. it's nice and simple. and the words went together really well. btw your signature pic is really cool!
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Jan 17 2005, 04:25 PM
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 dripping destruction Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929 |
very, very good.
i like it. |
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Feb 4 2005, 08:01 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
wow i love it so much.
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