You made me fall in love with you!, now i'm your willing prisoner... |
| *islandgirl4eva* |
 Jan 4 2005, 03:37 AM
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A stupid poem that I wrote for a stupid man who made me fall in love with him. Damn you!
The Willing Prisoner Why do I let you get to me? How do you do it everytime? I don't see it coming Never would suspect But there you are You're here and you've changed me For the good or for the bad It matters not For now I'm scarred Beyond all healing Beyond all sense I don't know how I let it happen You ran the path straight to my heart And I paved the way So I let this happen For now I'll let it be What will be will be And I'll take it in stride But I'd have you know That now you've got me |
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Jan 4 2005, 05:31 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio  Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
it's good. i understand what youre saying
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Jan 6 2005, 06:48 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
awesome, you put alot of emotion into that poem, i completely understand that feeling
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Jan 6 2005, 12:01 PM
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 ferrero rocher<3 Group: Member Posts: 243 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,255 |
honestly, i dont know much about poetry .. but i like it. i could put myself into what your saying.
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| *islandgirl4eva* |
Jan 8 2005, 02:24 PM
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QUOTE(alone in the world @ Jan 6 2005, 12:01 PM) honestly, i dont know much about poetry .. but i like it. i could put myself into what your saying.  I think a lot of people can relate...it's just....I don't know, it's something I think we all go through. Hopefully, we learn to get over it. |
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