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| *Zyryll* |
 Dec 31 2004, 12:53 PM
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The flower with great beauty (7)
The flow of water (5) The footstep of destruction (7) quick poem... yeah... |
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Dec 31 2004, 02:58 PM
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 白人看不懂 !!!!  Group: Member Posts: 3,838 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,824 |
who else read this title wrong?? O.o
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Dec 31 2004, 03:06 PM
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 that heaven is overrated Group: Member Posts: 5,096 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,124 |
QUOTE(DaTru KataLYST @ Dec 31 2004, 11:58 AM) who else read this title wrong?? O.o  Heh, when I saw the title, I thought it said random porn. =X It's a nice haiku. I really like it. 
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Dec 31 2004, 03:10 PM
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yerp! Group: Member Posts: 3,489 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,454 |
Eep, I read it wrong too!
 Haiku! I remember doing that in the 4th grade or something. Nice poem. 
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Dec 31 2004, 07:16 PM
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 jellyfishing, jellyfishing Group: Member Posts: 1,174 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,185 |
lol i knew it was a typo *cough* anyway, cool poem, random yes, but something about it has an effective feel to it, i like it
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| *Zyryll* |
Jan 1 2005, 12:50 AM
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crapp!!!! sorri guys. i spelled it wrong. and osrry if u thought it was random porn. that'd mean you checked this topic to find nothing to ur liking...
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Jan 1 2005, 02:54 AM
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 Dark Lord of McCandless Group: Member Posts: 2,226 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,761 |
The only problem (5)
With Haiku is that you just (7) Get started and then (5) |
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Jan 1 2005, 04:08 AM
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 Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
powerful words for walking in the garden or losing one's virginity. it's as easy as a footstep. maybe you werent thinking like that but ok.
dont rate haiku from 1-10 N/A |
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