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off with his head, political punk
ryfitaDF
post Dec 28 2004, 02:29 AM
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allright i'm going to just post this here for the sake of sharing. i know a few of you will hate it and that's cool. i think it's worth a read, though. i guess. here goes.

OFF WITH HIS HEAD
I expel allegiance to the flag
Of the empire of America
And I shun the autocracy it has become
With it’s conservative criteria
Let the elderly die of sickness
And our children pay china back
It comes with the territory of electing
A kleptomaniac

January twenty-eth
Two thousand and one
Put an end to our prosperity
Began the reign of corruption
Executive branch monarch
With oval office fiends
With policies not for people
But for harvesting the green

He claims to be compassionate
But leaves us all for dead
Clearly guilty of treason
Off with the traitor’s head!
Aborting evolution
Restricting who to wed
Clearly a sexist bigot
Here! Here! Off with his head!

Osama isn’t the reason
Why all of Islam hates us
Ask anyone with a mind of their own
They’ll list them off verbatim
Such a righteous leader
Killing thousands of innocent people
The majority of the blue states
Are fighting the real evil

He claims to be compassionate
But leaves us all for dead
Clearly guilty of treason
Off with the traitor’s head!
Aborting evolution
Restricting who to wed
Clearly a sexist bigot
Here! Here! Off with his head!

Up with guns! Down with love!
God shines on us from above!
A taste of monarchy in store
Get on your knees and hail King George!
A decree to silence every voice
A statute abolishing any choice
The eagle dropped the olive leaf
hail to King George! Hail to the Thief!

He claims to be compassionate
But leaves us all for dead
Clearly guilty of treason
Off with the traitor’s head!
Aborting evolution
Restricting who to wed
Clearly a sexist bigot
Here! Here! Off with his head!
 
 
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RiddleMeWonders
post Dec 28 2004, 01:36 PM
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You're there..
But you're not...




What is treason, when coming from us?
Can they arrest me for it?
For saying what I think should be done to our SYSTEM?
Can they take away all I have, all I am?
 
*not_your_average*
post Dec 28 2004, 03:16 PM
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haha, very nice! ^_^
 
smthngcrprategrl...
post Dec 29 2004, 04:52 PM
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very good. i like!
 
inthemudhole
post Dec 29 2004, 08:38 PM
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Awesome, awesome.
I never really have any critiquing for you.. all your stuff's awesome. thumbsup.gif
Great job again. :D
 
jambaJUICE
post Dec 29 2004, 08:40 PM
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Niice. Haha, "clearly a sexist bigot.''
 
sikdragon
post Dec 30 2004, 10:28 AM
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wow, somebody is ill-informed.
To write your best, write about stuff you know. I don't hate it, i pity the author. Such potential wasted on such a victim of propoganda.

If i read it without bias, it sounds as if you need to use some synonyms.
 

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