A newbie poem |
 Dec 23 2004, 08:44 PM
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Okies everyone my first poem in this place hope you like:
Sent from above I can still feel that warm embrace That warm kiss you left on my face All I did was give youallmy love All I knew was that you were sent from above You know I'll never let you down Because I'll always be around I can't belive that we are done I can't belive our love is gone My feeling still for you are here I always keep them near You will always be my first love Just because you were sent from above Well I hope you like it. Advice would help if you don't like it. i'll try and see if I can put up some more! Heh! Oh yeh that poem are for people that lost there first love! |
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Dec 23 2004, 09:03 PM
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I love you <33333 Group: Member Posts: 2,928 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,404 |
thats really good.....nice job
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Dec 24 2004, 12:07 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
that is good
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Dec 24 2004, 05:59 PM
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Member Group: Member Posts: 15 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 74,117 |
thanks a bunch! here's another one! lolz
 ! im gonna put the firstpoem i ever wrote in here go there...Hate and Love I hate you I love you I have both feelings for you at the same time... I hate the wat you act like a jerk but I love the way you are... I love the way I love you but I hate the way I hate you I love the way we still see each other everyday but I hate the way we're not together Love and hate are strong feelings Do you feel the same as I do? I'm so in love with you but I really hate you that poem was to my first boyfriend. he and i went on and off. i hope you get the poem!
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