Chocolate, a poem. |
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 Dec 23 2004, 04:04 PM
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Chocolate The rich, intense, sugary rush, You get when eating chocolate. All the caramel-filled sweetness, Swimming in your mouth. The knife slowly prods into the brown mousse cake, All while teasing your tastebuds. So cruelly and mercilessly, All just for chocolate. The truffle box, filles with sweet surprises, Not to be opened till Christmas. You tear off the plastic solely for temptation, Hoarding all the fudge-filled goodness. |
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Dec 26 2004, 02:00 AM
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 oh sweet pestilence  Group: Member Posts: 2,251 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,876 |
Interesting. That made me hungry. *looks around for chocolate*
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Dec 28 2004, 10:51 PM
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 hi, my name is brianna! =] Group: Official Member Posts: 5,764 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,114 |
Yum! Interesting poem, I love the 'luscious' words you used. =]
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Dec 28 2004, 11:31 PM
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 *aSh* =] Group: Member Posts: 2,075 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,101 |
oh yummy =] very nice
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Dec 29 2004, 08:42 PM
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 Can't have the hand without the cock. Group: Member Posts: 2,481 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,622 |
Hahaha cool. Chocolate, that's a first. Nice poem.
I'm hungry now. |
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Dec 29 2004, 08:56 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Haha, that's cool! :D
Food poems. XD Awesome word choice! :D |
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Dec 29 2004, 09:06 PM
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 skaters gonna skate. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,861 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,336 |
Ooh how I love chocolate.
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Dec 30 2004, 12:34 AM
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 boo Group: Member Posts: 5,512 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,765 |
yummy. *chocolate, where are you??*
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Dec 30 2004, 06:27 AM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
yummy...lol nice poem
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Dec 30 2004, 04:27 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 219 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 68,958 |
yumm and i just had chocolate.
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Dec 30 2004, 06:32 PM
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 i`M N0T A TEASE; JUST A REMiNDER 0F WUT U CAN`T HAVE!! Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,700 |
im salivating
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Dec 30 2004, 06:33 PM
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i`M N0T A TEASE; JUST A REMiNDER 0F WUT U CAN`T HAVE!! Group: Member Posts: 153 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 75,700 |
lol its good!
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