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 Dec 20 2004, 12:26 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio  Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599  |
we all picture what happens when we die
some say we go to heaven some say we go to hell those who know are in no condition to tell us like i wish i was... i want to know what's real and what's not not what maybe and what mabe not i want ultimate knowledge to know everything to be brilliant i want to fly to soar the skies to never come down to this hardship and war i want peace to live in a world where guns and cannons are banned to never see pain and suffering again so i think to myself if there really is a heaven and there really is a god then is that our reward for tolerating this life? with all the pain and suffering and war in this world is heaven our escape? and is hell our punishment? some say we go to heaven some say we go to hell those who know are in no condition to tell us ...like me |
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Dec 21 2004, 03:26 AM
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 Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
wow, skeptical and curious. not a very good combination. i like the way you said the one's who know are in no condition to tell. That was the only poetic thing within this mess of a group of stanzas.
from 1-10 i give it a 2<-that's being unbiased Do some research before you flame something. |
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Dec 21 2004, 11:30 AM
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my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
alright...like reasurch what?
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Dec 21 2004, 10:49 PM
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Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
research what those things are and what they are to different people. Research how to get there by the different maps men make. Research God before you pass him off as a fairy tale. Listen to boths sides of the story.
If you write about what you know it could turn out deeper and more graphic. Sentimental and an emotion other than rejection. |
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Dec 22 2004, 01:45 AM
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 Oh you'd be surprised Group: Member Posts: 2,406 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,886 |
um ok
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Dec 22 2004, 11:45 AM
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Its hard to think of a title for this becuase it is unbiased.
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Dec 22 2004, 12:24 PM
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my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
QUOTE(sikdragon @ Dec 21 2004, 9:49 PM) research what those things are and what they are to different people. Research how to get there by the different maps men make. Research God before you pass him off as a fairy tale. Listen to boths sides of the story. If you write about what you know it could turn out deeper and more graphic. Sentimental and an emotion other than rejection. well im not saying god doesn't exist. it's just that the person in the poem is questioning everything. like what happens when you die, god and stuff. im not saying it doesn't exist im just saying is it? and stuff like that. im not saying it doesn't exist. |
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