I'll join the fad..., writings beh: yours trueleh! |
 Dec 11 2004, 11:32 PM
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MCMXC a. D.  Group: Member Posts: 106 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 69,715  |
A broken heart,
Whispering from it's dying yell. A trapped soul, laying in it's cage for all eternal hell. A trembling hand, Crying out for it's remorse and sorrow. A desperate tear, Falling down it's path to follow. A lost crow, Who had learned to become a dove. A wilting rose, To be shown to a true lost love... _____ Ehh.. I wrote this a long time ago. I broke up with my first girlfriend. I was stupid back then. She is still hot though. I was an over dramatic kid then. _____ Oh fallen angel, Take me on your torn and battered wings. Oh mortal human, Take me to your home that sings. Oh darkened demon, Take me from your pit that death it brings. _____ Don't ask. I will post more when I get the rest back from my friend. He wanted to look through them, and maybe use some as lyrics. |
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Dec 11 2004, 11:39 PM
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 Change Gon Come Group: Member Posts: 2,286 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,822 |
hey, it's good. getting your heart broken sucks ass. we're all dramatic. and it leads to great poetry and junk. =]
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Dec 12 2004, 01:53 AM
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 There is a light that never goes out.... Group: Member Posts: 107 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 60,044 |
 Thats really great work, but Jesus, it's depressing.
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Dec 15 2004, 02:19 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
wow that's cute. it's like describing its one word to a meaningful word^^;; and the rest is like bad to the goods^^;; great job!
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