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 Dec 9 2004, 11:14 PM
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 sweet/not/sour  Group: Member Posts: 35 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,748  |
blech, poetry class at school. gave it my best shot, yet it's still odd. well here it is:
Differences and similarities but really we're all the same deep down in our hearts is the part we have to blame Feelings getting all messed up under control, all thought out wish i knew what was going on or what this really was about we regret it, i know but what can we do this world is tumbled and scattered there's no peace between me and you our differences and similarities are really all the same because deep down in our hearts is the part we have to blame  ech, short i know
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Dec 10 2004, 12:24 AM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
It's not short. There's a certain somethin` about this poem I quite can't figure out..it's a good thing tho. But anyways keep it up and keep postin` `em up
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Dec 10 2004, 01:48 PM
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 team late night queen Group: Member Posts: 1,602 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 2,861 |
this ones good. i like. lol.
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Dec 15 2004, 02:23 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
sounds like a movie saying that you cant turn back from all those scattered memories. heh good try for a first try ;)
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