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| *Azarel* |
 Dec 8 2004, 06:59 PM
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Confusion.
Another state of mind. Suffocation, aggravation, Hatred dwells inside. Even with the eyes shut, I can feel the blood rush. The adrenaline doesn't stop rising, Making it hard for the hate that I'm hiding. This state of mind, Out of control. What do I find? There's nowhere to go. Because I can't even talk to you. I can't even speak with you. Nothing that you can do. Shut off in my own world. Leaving all else behind. I'm trapped in another state of mind. All I do is bleed. You can't reach me. You can't even see me. Even though you try, You don't understand Your first choice is die When you're in this state of mind. |
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Dec 8 2004, 07:09 PM
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 There is a light that never goes out....  Group: Member Posts: 107 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 60,044 |
Wow, I like that. Jesus, I can already hear music to go along with that. I mean, it may not be a song, but I can just hear the music for it.
 Kicks ass. 
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Dec 8 2004, 08:30 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
QUOTE(ShadowPixie @ Dec 8 2004, 6:09 PM) Wow, I like that. Jesus, I can already hear music to go along with that. I mean, it may not be a song, but I can just hear the music for it. Kicks ass. yeah that is really good!and it does kinda sound like a song even if that's not what it's meant to be. |
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Dec 15 2004, 02:36 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
you know this is actually a good poem that it would be wonderful to fit as a lyric^^
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