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 Dec 6 2004, 03:11 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio  Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599  |
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you say that i'm special you say that i'm sweet but your words go right through me how can you say those nice things about me when all of the world seems to disagree? you say that i'm pretty you say that i'm smart but your words seem to have left me in the dark how can you not just let me be when all of the world seems to have abandoned me? you say that you love me you say that you'll stay but your words are just that just words how can you mean all those things you say when all of the world's so far away? |
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Dec 7 2004, 11:44 AM
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 I can't believe its not "Ryan" Group: Member Posts: 1,981 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,368 |
Has nice transitions...
Your special to me...hehe! |
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Dec 11 2004, 01:04 PM
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my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
aww thank you!
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Dec 11 2004, 06:03 PM
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 RiKACHANtEL Group: Member Posts: 3,876 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,230 |
ohh i like it...thats how i feel sometimes
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Dec 11 2004, 06:09 PM
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my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
thank you!
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Dec 12 2004, 02:21 PM
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 and they say imitation is flattering Group: Member Posts: 1,337 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,269 |
Maybe you shouldn't use the word 'seem' so much.. and the rhyme scheme's off.
But it's nice =P Interesting message. |
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Dec 12 2004, 06:05 PM
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my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
Oh...i only used seem/s 3 times and it was really intended to rhyme. but that's for the advice
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Dec 15 2004, 02:17 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
wow that person sure sounds like he/she DOES love you so much that he/she doesnt really care what other people say about you. awww
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Dec 16 2004, 03:52 PM
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my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
thanks
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Dec 22 2004, 03:42 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Posts: 8,274 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,001 |
how sad .. its pretty plain to me but its pretty good still
 good job.
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Dec 22 2004, 11:50 AM
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Thats really neat. Sweet, simple, carefree, meaningful....yep a 7 out of 10
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Dec 22 2004, 03:07 PM
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my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
thank you!
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