two depressing poems |
 Nov 28 2004, 02:09 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
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if i beg on my knees would you want me back forget our differences and get back on track if i kiss your lips goodnight and protect you from harm would you come back to me with open arms if i promise to be the man you would always love will i be the on you'll be thinking of if you're ever alone and out in the night ill be the one to hold you tight... MY REALIZATION i couldnt tell what my heart was going for i ignored it, i didnt wanna care anymore but the feeling got so strong it went outta hand made me realize and finally understand no matter how much i try to forget these feelings for you.. i cant deny it im still loving you... a little bit short but it explains alot hope you likes |
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Nov 28 2004, 06:53 AM
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QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ Nov 28 2004, 2:09 AM) IF if i beg on my knees would you want me back forget our differences and get back on track if i kiss your lips goodnight and protect you from harm would you come back to me with open arms if i promise to be the man you would always love will i be the on you'll be thinking of if you're ever alone and out in the night ill be the one to hold you tight... MY REALIZATION i couldnt tell what my heart was going for i ignored it, i didnt wanna care anymore but the feeling got so strong it went outta hand made me realize and finally understand no matter how much i try to forget these feelings for you.. i cant deny it im still loving you... a little bit short but it explains alot hope you likes omfg those were so beauftiful  and yes they do explain alot. pls make more!
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Nov 28 2004, 10:40 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
hhe thnx yeh umm go check out the "for those who over look this forumn" topic in the writing section is has writing pieces of alot of people who post and if u like the stuff i write you can look there.. or search the topics cuz none of the posts have been added in yet
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Nov 28 2004, 04:36 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
Those are really good mang...Oh yeah, by the way have you seen Joe around lately..?
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Nov 28 2004, 07:38 PM
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 ...and this is me.. Group: Member Posts: 3,518 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 57,899 |
its very beautiful..keep up with the thoughts.
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Nov 29 2004, 07:26 PM
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 whatever d00de Group: Member Posts: 1,349 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 63,060 |
wow that's beautiful...it touched me. i love it
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Nov 29 2004, 07:39 PM
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 GHETTO FABULOUS Group: Member Posts: 435 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 64,223 |
Wow, I think i`ll go slit my wrist now. Now am playen those are nice poems
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