a poem i wrote like a month ago, it's not that good... |
 Nov 19 2004, 07:44 AM
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 xinistical member  Group: Member Posts: 123 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,328  |
Alone
Beautiful flowers bloom in spring. The air is cleansed by an April rain. Lovely nature surrounds the earth. While a lonely weed just had its birth. Flowers turn away with great disgust. The vegetables gave it zero trust. But a weed is just a weed. They can’t control their awful deed. If everyone could choose what to be, No one would want to be lonely like me. I am that weed and no one cares. Around me I sense all their glares. For once, why can’t someone understand? I don’t wanna be destroyed by human hands. Why can’t I just be admired? Why must I die alone in fire? Why do you all hate me so? You’re not even sad to see me go. But what have I ever done to you? I understand I’m only a weed, I really do. |
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Nov 19 2004, 12:32 PM
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Because you take all the water from the other plants.
I don't think you're a weed. Just a swan among ducks. |
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Nov 19 2004, 04:50 PM
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 I'm Lost In My Own kryptonite Group: Member Posts: 59 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 61,556 |
i like it, and i feel like that sometimes.
 well i think it's great!
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Nov 19 2004, 05:00 PM
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I like it.
but remember, after a weed is picked, it always grows back =] |
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Nov 19 2004, 09:45 PM
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xinistical member Group: Member Posts: 123 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,328 |
QUOTE(sikdragon @ Nov 19 2004, 12:32 PM) Because you take all the water from the other plants. I don't think you're a weed. Just a swan among ducks. haha. maybe...i don't think so. |
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