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 Nov 19 2004, 01:58 AM
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 hello : )  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139  |
here is a poem thing on hate.. not really good, but oh well
i hate to hear the yelling I hate to see the tears i hate the way you cause pain I hate when we have to call the cops I hate when they have to get involved I hate that you think you are okay And that you want to take her away I wished I could have been there when you beat her up Because I would have loved to hurt you like you hurt us I hate the way we try to help And the way you rejected us I hate to see the anger and pain in her eyes I hate that you cause her fear I hate to see you ruin her life I hate when you come with gifts And all your fake lies I hate that you don’t see your problem I hate to see you take it out on her I hate hearing all the bitching I hate to hear the threatening I hate that you cause her so much suffering When she doesn’t deserve it all I hate to see her hurt Because of you, her sister I hate to see the way you act Because it makes me sick inside But most of all, I hate how you make me hate |
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Dec 8 2004, 05:10 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
i think it's good ^_^
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Dec 11 2004, 04:49 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
wow it's strong. Nice poem,, reminds me of my dad
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Dec 15 2004, 02:21 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
it sounds like a dad beating a mom and giving all the fears to her into her new memories tsk tsk. that's a very sad poem! reminds me of my friend whose life is same as the poem you made up there. nice job i guess x]
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