my goodbye |
 Nov 18 2004, 12:58 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
i wanna let you go but i keep holding on
i dont wanna face the truth that your already gone you were my everything that special person i can love your always gonna be the one ill be thinking of i wont be able to see that smile on your face not able to feel the warmness of your embrace ive never felt love like this i can never forget when we had our first special kiss no matter how much i want you, and how much i cry i have to let you go, and say my goodbye me and rhymes |
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Nov 18 2004, 01:10 AM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
omg..that's really good!
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Nov 18 2004, 01:44 AM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
hahah thnx
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Nov 18 2004, 08:43 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
Oh wow, I haven't been here in a week and already I find a good poem =]
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Nov 19 2004, 01:52 AM
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 hello : ) Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
oh wow. that is really good! awesome job =)
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Nov 20 2004, 10:36 AM
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 Stay Cheezin Group: Member Posts: 56 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,829 |
that was deep and i felt every word u said...its really hard of letting go of someone you really wanna hold on to...so i feel ur pain...all in all nice poem =)
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Nov 23 2004, 09:32 PM
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catastrophic sweetness Group: Member Posts: 92 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 58,334 |
Real good job. I love it =) You're an awesome writer.
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