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 Nov 15 2004, 11:54 PM
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 layout whore  Group: Member Posts: 1,031 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,756  |
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I just watched Titanic.....tear. I love that movie....I know this one is real simple, but i wanted it to be that way. I wanted it to be more emotional than flashy u know? so lemme know what u think. |
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Nov 16 2004, 12:39 AM
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 hi, my name is brianna! =] Group: Official Member Posts: 5,764 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,114 |
That's so cute! =]
I think you should've done something with the picture though, or make it more clearer because it's a bit blurry. The skin could be a lot more beautiful if you put more effort into it. 
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Nov 16 2004, 01:13 AM
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 kelly[changed] 2 liz Group: Member Posts: 525 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,472 |
prety...but plain..nice try though
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Nov 16 2004, 08:29 AM
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layout whore Group: Member Posts: 1,031 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,756 |
thanks. i know its plain. you dont have to tell me that. Like I said before, I wanted it to be plain. And yes i know the picture is blurred. I wanted it to be that way. The focus should be on what they are saying, and have the pic as a background resource. but thanks anyway.
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Nov 16 2004, 01:35 PM
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 Amberific. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,913 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,772 |
The text on the right isn't a title; you're not supposed to capitalize all the letters. You put "Promise Me You'll Never Let go, no matter how hopeless" but it should be "Promise me you'll never let go, no matter how hopeless." I know that's really picky of me, but it was hammered into my mind in AP English last year.
And I don't really think the techish text on "Content" and "Hopeless Thoughts" matches. Other than that, I really like it. Simplicity is nice. |
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Nov 16 2004, 03:50 PM
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layout whore Group: Member Posts: 1,031 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,756 |
QUOTE(MissMata @ Nov 16 2004, 1:35 PM) The text on the right isn't a title; you're not supposed to capitalize all the letters. You put "Promise Me You'll Never Let go, no matter how hopeless" but it should be "Promise me you'll never let go, no matter how hopeless." I know that's really picky of me, but it was hammered into my mind in AP English last year. And I don't really think the techish text on "Content" and "Hopeless Thoughts" matches. Other than that, I really like it. Simplicity is nice. haha i didnt even pay attention to the capitalization on the words. thanks for noticing! lol. Yea, I dont like this layout anymore, im gonna make a new one with the same pic.... 
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Nov 16 2004, 04:16 PM
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 ♥ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,066 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 18,393 |
awwwwwwwww
 that's such a sad movie, but i love it. as well as the layout... eeeep! it's pretty simple, but it works. layout's classy, a lot like the movie. i like it!<333 |
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Nov 16 2004, 05:04 PM
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 Smile Like a Retard =D Group: Member Posts: 1,350 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 63,186 |
you should really do something with these pictures... or well, maybe you did, haha =) cool layout... or well, picture
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Nov 16 2004, 06:31 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,025 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,051 |
i would advise blending the banner with the blog, it looks a bit sharp. otherwise nice job. change the font of the content thing. that tech font doesn't match well, otherwise i like it! good job!
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Nov 16 2004, 08:08 PM
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layout whore Group: Member Posts: 1,031 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,756 |
QUOTE(Gypsy Eyes @ Nov 16 2004, 6:31 PM) i would advise blending the banner with the blog, it looks a bit sharp. otherwise nice job. change the font of the content thing. that tech font doesn't match well, otherwise i like it! good job! thanks....but i think im getting rid of this one altogether and just starting over. it didnt do anything for me. lol. not feeling it this time. check back on the showcase later for a new one |
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Nov 16 2004, 09:15 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,239 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,253 |
I love that movie... It's simple but still very "emotional" and the colors are nice. I would've maybe used a darker blue though
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Nov 17 2004, 01:35 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,077 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,904 |
You need to work on the blending a little bit more.
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Nov 18 2004, 04:17 PM
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 aka babiebubblez03 :o) Group: Member Posts: 203 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,478 |
there was no blending in the first place.. i dont think...
I love the layout! I dont think its too simple! Its great.. it fits with the movie.. and the blue is soooo cool. I love it! |
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Nov 18 2004, 05:53 PM
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layout whore Group: Member Posts: 1,031 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,756 |
QUOTE(babiedoll03 @ Nov 18 2004, 4:17 PM) there was no blending in the first place.. i dont think... I love the layout! I dont think its too simple! Its great.. it fits with the movie.. and the blue is soooo cool. I love it! lol thanks. i chose blue, because that was the whole hue of the entire 2nd half of the movie when they're in the water...so i thought it fit. and you're right, i didnt blend anytihng.....so i dont know what that other person was talking bout. |
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Nov 19 2004, 12:03 AM
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 ©shesdiztinQtive Group: Member Posts: 562 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 56,389 |
yeah a little plain but not too bad. the movie was awesome. :D one thing, the font doesn't really seem to fit.
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