Chains |
 Oct 9 2004, 05:26 PM
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Our hearts are bound together with the cruel chains of love and lust
These chains will never break, they hold us strong Forcing our love into miserable piles of dust For Love does not stay all smiles and kisses Lies, jealousy, fear and hate........corrupt our hearts and make them ache Even we cannot take anymore The chains still sear our hearts with pain Chains which cannot be broken Eventually driving us insane |
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Oct 9 2004, 06:53 PM
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cb=bullshit. Group: Member Posts: 1,783 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,793 |
It's a nice little poem...
Welcome to Writing. 
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Oct 9 2004, 07:15 PM
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 don't worry, be happy~ Group: Member Posts: 1,538 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,899 |
nice!! quickwrites are awsome!
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Oct 10 2004, 10:18 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
wow love this quick write =P welcome to writing and hope you stay =P
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