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Oct 9 2004, 11:43 AM
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![]() The voices talk too much... -.-u ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,099 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,078 |
Boo. I'm back.
Hopefully this version is better. (Could be worse though.) NOTE :: So far I haven't figured out a way for it to work in both IE and Firefox. So, for now anyways, it looks best in IE. http://www.xanga.com/dreamy_afternoon I don't mind CC and flames. I use them to cook my food. :P (That's Constructive Critiscism for you people who were wondering. ^_^) |
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Oct 9 2004, 11:45 AM
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![]() Welcome To My Life ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 114 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 54,401 |
nice job!!!!!
lol you posted ontop of me! lol what you mean by you papercliped me? lol |
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Oct 9 2004, 11:52 AM
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![]() The voices talk too much... -.-u ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,099 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,078 |
http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1712499
^ Read that. And then I have to explain that there is no system. Just the fact that I give paperclips whenever I feel a layout is exceptional or deseves a paperclip for effort. Tha amount of paperclips determines how good I think a layout is. But how many and reason is determined on the spot. |
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Oct 9 2004, 12:49 PM
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![]() love sucks...big time jessir.. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 661 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,644 |
hmm horizontal scrollbar :O...plain ...like a 5/10
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Oct 9 2004, 12:54 PM
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![]() The voices talk too much... -.-u ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,099 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,078 |
QUOTE hmm horizontal scrollbar :O...plain ...like a 5/10 ..... Screen resolution? It works better in things over 800 x 600. Mostly because that's the size of the image. Can you tell me WHY it's plain? Just saying 'plain' isn't good enough. I'd like to know WHY. |
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Oct 9 2004, 01:08 PM
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questions make me blue. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,608 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,796 |
it`s okay. not bad. try adding more effects to it. [maybe that`s why emmalie was complaining about it being too plain.] but good job.
try looking at other people`s layouts and be inspired. there are better layouts. in xanga showcase, don`t expect people to go crazy over your layout unless they`ve seen better. |
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Oct 9 2004, 01:13 PM
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![]() love sucks...big time jessir.. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 661 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 1,644 |
i said it was plain because of the lack of effects it doesnt mean its bad ..jus simple and some people do think simple is better.
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Oct 9 2004, 01:25 PM
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![]() The voices talk too much... -.-u ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,099 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,078 |
QUOTE it`s okay. not bad. try adding more effects to it. [maybe that`s why emmalie was complaining about it being too plain.] but good job. try looking at other people`s layouts and be inspired. there are better layouts. in xanga showcase, don`t expect people to go crazy over your layout unless they`ve seen better. Give me an example of an effect I can use that will work well? (Please? I'm here to make it better.) I do get inspired. I just don't have the almight PHOTOSHOP to go with the insperation. (Don't have it. Can't use all the tutorials that go with it. -.-u -sigh-) I know there are better layouts. I'm not claiming to be the best layout creator. (In fact, I KNOW my layouts suck asss. =) That' why I'm here. To get better.) I'm not expecting you people to go crazy. I want specific, constructive criticism. (Because I write. I expect that, because you can't write a story and have someone say 'your story sucks. make it better.') |
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Oct 9 2004, 01:42 PM
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questions make me blue. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,608 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,796 |
QUOTE(C.Lime.Jello. @ Oct 9 2004, 1:25 PM) Give me an example of an effect I can use that will work well? (Please? I'm here to make it better.) I do get inspired. I just don't have the almight PHOTOSHOP to go with the insperation. (Don't have it. Can't use all the tutorials that go with it. -.-u -sigh-) I know there are better layouts. I'm not claiming to be the best layout creator. (In fact, I KNOW my layouts suck asss. =) That' why I'm here. To get better.) I'm not expecting you people to go crazy. I want specific, constructive criticism. (Because I write. I expect that, because you can't write a story and have someone say 'your story sucks. make it better.') you gave me the impression you did. you could try adding a border on your bg. the font is so overrated so try adding effects to it. [the font on the bg] and add more effects on your links & font in the blog. adding a gif as a bg won`t do that much good. |
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Oct 9 2004, 01:48 PM
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![]() The voices talk too much... -.-u ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,099 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 39,078 |
QUOTE you gave me the impression you did. you could try adding a border on your bg. the font is so overrated so try adding effects to it. [the font on the bg] and add more effects on your links & font in the blog. adding a gif as a bg won`t do that much good. I'm sorry. =) The last time I tried adding a border to that bg, it turned blue. It doesn't match. -.-u (I'll try and figure it out.... >.<) .... Like.... Blur it or something? o.O I don't get that one. (I'm sorry, I must sound so stupid. >.<) Er.... Effects on the links? You're only allowed one hover. Lemme try tho. What kind of effect on the blog font? It's arial.... o.O (Do you mean, like, use a diffrent font?) .gif image? Okay, I won't do that. |
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Oct 9 2004, 02:18 PM
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![]() Welcome To My Life ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 114 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 54,401 |
woah chill out every1 and have some respect!
now...go to my showcasr topic and leave me replys damnit |
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Oct 13 2004, 05:53 PM
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![]() F a y t i s d e s t i n y ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 214 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 49,153 |
Wow, I LOVE YOUR LAYOUT, i am trying to make one like that, with the anime pix that i have
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Oct 13 2004, 05:58 PM
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Lauren loves YOU. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,357 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,793 |
it's just so purrrrrdy!!!! me likey. my old layout was all grey so i've become pretty bored with the whole gray themes... that's the only reason why i'm giving you a 9.5/10
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Oct 13 2004, 06:01 PM
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te quiero ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678 |
its okay, but it looks too much like a picture was slapped onto the background. try actually... doing something with it.
if i made any sense. but yeah, its ok. but i'm not into anime. so its just a little less than ok. but then again. that's just me. |
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Oct 13 2004, 06:11 PM
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Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,989 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,691 |
The image quality isn't good.
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